could i get some feedback on that comic please ?

link is below :

[Click to view comic: 'homo erotic']

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It's shit. If I was you I'd give up. You're never going to amount to anything. Go and take up fishing or something.

Gosh, I hate to say anything negative. So I'll just say, terrific post, Kramer!

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What others say about boorite!

An auditor representing Clarkwork Logistics has returned from the field, and his evaluation of your comic is not encouraging. Here is a summary of his findings.

s = Sodomy Content (kg): 8
F = Force Exerted by Punchline (kg/sq.meter): 2
t = Set-up Time (seconds): 6

Assessed Comic Value (V) = 100*F(1/t)(1+s(0.01))

The audit concludes,
"The Comic Value of the client's strip has been assessed at 36. This compares with an average comic value approaching 100 and a theoretical maximum exceeding 300 (where s approaches 10, F approaches 10, and s is about 3 seconds)."

The auditor also notes that the posting of your request for comic evaluation to the General Discussion forum is a violation of ISO 9002 comic standards. For the usual fee, he is willing to withhold this item from his final report.

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"You'll burn for this. Burn in jail!"

Or you could just bend over and take it up the ass from Tobor like most of the moron newbies.

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Do you want ants? Because that's how you get ants.

That should, of course, read "t is about 3 seconds". Rest assured, our auditor has been admonished to stop taking liquid lunches on his way back from the field.

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"You'll burn for this. Burn in jail!"

This idea of "secret illegal gay spots" fascinates me. Maybe I'm standing on one right now! How would I know? If I stand here long enough, will I become gay? What if I walk over one on the way to lunch? Suppose a gay man sees me walking over it, and interprets it as a solicitation? Oh my!

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The what mentioned above is total fiction. Please don't take it seriously!

First of all, wrong thread, arsehole!
Second, it's spelt "tight", arsehole!
Thirdly, "i" should be "I", arsehole!
Fourthly, Dr. Pedantic must be rolling in his grave, arsehole!
Fifthly, you can post comics in a thread without linking them, arsehole!
Lastly, you're an arsehole, arsehole!

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I am not 16 going on not 17, I know that I'm naive.

Bazilla thinks sub_m7 is an arsehole.

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This is my signature.

I think kramer was knocked off his tricycle by a newbie when he was wee.

I know of one... in my pants!

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I meant in Kajun's pants, because he has homosexual sex with homosexual men.

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What others say about boorite!

I'll hold back the biting comment forming in my mind as long as this quoted comment doesn't result in a long winded conversation about men, homosexuality or any related matter therein...

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Carry the battle to them. Don't let them bring it to you. Put them on the defensive. And don't ever apologize for anything. - Harry S Truman, 33rd president of US (1884 - 1972)

Those newbie comics are so cuntingly faggoty. They are so goddamn queer that Kajun probably wrote them under a pseudoynm. Of all the man on man limp wristed lisping sodomy bullshit.

But I do think Kramer should show more tolerance for newbies.

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"Eat a fucking cock." - attitudechicka

You're an inspiration to us all, Smarmulus...

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Carry the battle to them. Don't let them bring it to you. Put them on the defensive. And don't ever apologize for anything. - Harry S Truman, 33rd president of US (1884 - 1972)

What wonderfully descriptive terms.

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100 pounds of shit in a 25 pound sack.

They're faggotly delicious!

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What others say about boorite!

Any sex I might have had with Boorite in the past was purely heterosexual.

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Dad was flammable

Uh oh. Please tell me boorite hasn't replaced me as the subject of your single entendres!

You feeling threatened, Andy?

And Smarmulus, I give credit where credit's due. Sub_M7 asked for an opinion on his strip, and I gave one. He's been hanging around here for months now, begging us to visit his godawful website and join his mysterious gang.

You seem to think I have this low tolerance for newbies. I don't. Everyone was a newbie once, that in itself is no reason to give them abuse. Compared to some people on this site, I am positively restrained.

I'm just sick of Sub_M7 and his lame attempts to draw attention to himself.

You stay away from him, bitch, or I'll scratch your eyes out!

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What others say about boorite!

I agree.

sub_m7 saw that we had a community here and just dumped spam into the forums. Seriously, that's all it was. He was not part of the group. he had made no comics, had never participated in the forums. he just turned up and said "Look at my site", as if Brad owed him the right to use the community he has built up for free advertising.

Basically, he's an annoying and insistent git who won't stop crapping on about his own crappy site. He isn't worth defending.

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This signature has performed an illegal operation and has been shut down.

My response is to weigh this thread down with crappy posts like this one.

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What others say about boorite!

ok.

first of all,
this comic is not anti-gay , if any of you nerdy comic freaks should have interpretated it that way

second
bazilla has some serious mental problems, but all of you and especially he and his psychiatrist should know about that anyway

third
the name of the thread is -dropping standards- for fuck's sake. this DOES actually represent my opinion, which is that i wasnt too happy with that comic.

forth
bazilla again (fuck him anyway, "comic overlord", huh)
if there schould be a spelling mistake, it DOESNT REALLY MATTER, if people whose IQ is above 25 can understand it (and you apperently did, so...)

fifth
the thing about that secret, illegal gay spot is probably the only good aspect of the whole comic

sixth
about spamming. we flooded the damn net with spam, so it wasnt only your miserable site...
but yours was one of the few we found worthy to pay a visit to every now and then, so DO fell honoured

seventh
concerning this newbie thing....
are we 6-12 and still at school, where the bigger kids terrify the small ones, OR WHAT THE FUCK ???? (!!!!!)
i dont mind giving respect to people who have been around longer, but i wont take crap just cause i am new to that site

eighth
FUCK ALL OF YOU WHO CRITIZISED MY COMIC APPART FROM BOORITE AND KRAMER_VS_KRAMER;

so long, N6 (sub_m7)

ps: we gonna make a party in 2 weeks (14/09/02) and every member from script creator gets free access
e-mail me for more information or visit our site (this is NO SPAM, but an invitation to some non web-based event, which is probably sth 60 - 70 % of you nerds have never been to, so take the chance NOW !!!)

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PLUS,

to fucking bastard-bazilla-arselicking-mutherfuck :

i know you can include comics in posts,
HOWEVER, FOR GOD'S SAKE, I PREFER IT THE OTHER WAY

ok ???

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