I want to see what you think of them

Your comix are in the 4s dude. Read more peeps comix and form new ideas based on ideas gone before.

Work on your writing.

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"I intend to live forever -- so far, so good."

The D&D one was funny. More please.

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Please replace the handset, and try again.

There is only one four. Unless you mean it's in the forties.

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Batman created by Bob Kane

The last one was pretty good. I will also say they are in the 4s.

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Legend, oh legend, the third wheel legend...always in the way.

Slightly below average, which means tolerable, not horrible, but just not funny enough to get a chuckle. I think you can improve and you don't seem annoying thus far. I'll go with the 4 crowd here.

yeah id say 5 or 6, but considering these are your first comics is a definate plus. I'd imagine good things from you

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I don't see any jokes at all. 2.

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Batman created by Bob Kane

Thanks for saying i have SOME potential, i'll keep working at it.

Here's an idea for future strips:

take a word from your everyday vocabulary and Google it. Keep doing that until you find something funny. Analyze why that made you laugh then do 3 panels on something similar.

If that doesn't work just use TOBOR, Spankling and the word "RAWR" in sequence as Spankling reads the news.

Now if THAT doesn't work, go to "FIGHTS START HERE" and tell everyone that you are really JDPLVY looking for advice. The spice will flow!

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Because it's good for wrestling. . .

I'm a newbie too, plus, I come at things with an English major's perspective, but here goes anyway:

I like the one with the bug best. Kind of a neat absurdist bent to it and I laughed out loud. I give your stuff a 5. Good luck.

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"Mediocre people do exceptional things all the time." --OK Go

I'm a newbie too, plus, I come at things with an English major's perspective, but here goes anyway:

I like the one with the bug best. Kind of a neat absurdist bent to it and I laughed out loud. I give your stuff a 5. Good luck.

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"Mediocre people do exceptional things all the time." --OK Go

You're actually not that bad... I've seen worse.

You also actually kinda make an attempt to tell real jokes sometimes, which is great. Too often, people here are quick to rely on uber-obsurist humor. [The Post-Modern humor obviously has elements of obsurity in it. I'm not saying that obsurist humor is bad.. It's just a fine line that people walk when they tell obsure jokes. People can't just blurt out "MY NAME IS RASPUTIN! I WEAR SOCKS INSTEAD OF CONDOMS!" and expect a laugh from anyone with sanity.]

While you have the potential, you like.. something. I can't quiet put my finger on it. There's just something that lies between potentinal and actually creating a laugh.. that gray area you (and I, most of the time) live in. Since I can't nail funny everytime, I can't really vote for or against, but I can tell you the few things I know

Captialize a bit more.. and since the pictures are fixed, it's also a good idea to rely a little more on dialouge. ..and that's it for now. Later!

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Shame on Us for All We Have Done. May God Have Mercy on Our Dirty Little Hearts.

2 and a half

1.778912. That's after formulating how crappy they were and adding decimal points for them being so bad that they're good. Also, vaginas.

-2... joking. The D&D and the one with the fire were good. Fire good.

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Get Your War On

Yeah, im going for that postmodern add to it, because i love postmodern, that fact that someone knew that makes me happy that it was evident, but i will try and make some more better ones.

yep, 4's roughly.

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-=- You eat one lousy foot and they call you a cannibal. What a world. -=-

Boinky, could you please, fix that video? I think it's broken, she never gets her panties off.

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"Mediocre people do exceptional things all the time." --OK Go

You're on the internet! If you want to see a vagina that bad, surf around a while and you'll find a naked lady.

Here, try this!

I loved 'Get Crunk' and the rest were ok. I rate 6.5 out of 110% of something else.

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GOVT. Warning: Do not smoke around children they will badger you for fags.

I just recently did two more, and i think that i thought these ones through a little bit more, so tell me what you guys think about them... thanks for the input. (grammar is bad on the first one, but try and deal with it, i made the 2nd one more correct because of the 1st ones grammatical n00bishness)

They're sweet. Not all very funny but most are. You have one of the best beginnings I seen.
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I love your work and hope to see more.

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Moo?

Any new ideas/constructive criticisms on my work? Most of my friends really like them, but i was wondering what you guys were thinking.