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SPAgentJackBauer24
Pink Donkey Wrangler

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2-23-06 9:18pm (new)
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not_Scyess
not laughing with you

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There might be jokes in there somewhere, but I didn't see any after the first three comics so I stopped looking.

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peddling the funny around since 09/24/2002

2-23-06 10:02pm (new)
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biped
Mr. Wonderful

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Please start making your comics funny instead of boring.

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Legend, oh legend, the third wheel legend...always in the way.

2-23-06 10:17pm (new)
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Kaenash
Comic Overlord

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Luminous News

2-24-06 8:41am (new)
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DaveMonkey
Your Pinnochio Ninja

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Not terribly funny, but well written.

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"Chance!? You had your chance, and you gobbled its balls!"

2-24-06 9:03am (new)
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squidrabies
I am a Care Bear.

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[fires]

Thanks to two kind hunters, I'm alive right now.

[fires]

2-24-06 10:04am (new)
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SPAgentJackBauer24
Pink Donkey Wrangler

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Part VIII should be out soon.

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I'm at The-Geek. The-Geek is my home. thegeek is the maker of The-Geek. I know that's complex.

2-24-06 10:40am (new)
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SPAgentJackBauer24
Pink Donkey Wrangler

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Here it is:

[Click to view comic: 'The Newsroom: Episode 8: Returning to The Crime Scene']

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I'm at The-Geek. The-Geek is my home. thegeek is the maker of The-Geek. I know that's complex.

2-24-06 10:50am (new)
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SPAgentJackBauer24
Pink Donkey Wrangler

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Part IX:

[Click to view comic: 'The Newsroom: Episode 9: Get up off your butts!']

Part X will probably be here Later today, or early Tomorrow!

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I'm at The-Geek. The-Geek is my home. thegeek is the maker of The-Geek. I know that's complex.

2-24-06 11:16am (new)
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LuckyGuess
hm

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Erm... eh...

That's all I have to say about that.

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the kid's getting old, the kid's getting old

2-24-06 12:27pm (new)
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SPAgentJackBauer24
Pink Donkey Wrangler

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And that means?

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I'm at The-Geek. The-Geek is my home. thegeek is the maker of The-Geek. I know that's complex.

2-24-06 1:07pm (new)
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SPAgentJackBauer24
Pink Donkey Wrangler

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I got the idea sonner than I thought I would.

Here's Part X:

[Click to view comic: 'The Newsroom: Episode 10: A Speech by Zach']

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I'm at The-Geek. The-Geek is my home. thegeek is the maker of The-Geek. I know that's complex.

2-24-06 1:16pm (new)
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SPAgentJackBauer24
Pink Donkey Wrangler

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Part XI:

[Click to view comic: 'The Newsroom: Episode 11: One-On-One']

This one tells you my age, and another guest appears on Maurice's show, from another possible comic I could make.

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I'm at The-Geek. The-Geek is my home. thegeek is the maker of The-Geek. I know that's complex.

2-24-06 5:19pm (new)
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LuckyGuess
hm

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Well as you can see, I'm using the double fire power up. Double fire creates a small fire ball that explodes on impact into many smaller balls. While fun to use, this weapon is not particularly useful during boss battles or in the final stages, mainly due to it's slow rate of fire. And even the kitsch factor of exploding fire balls gets boring after a while.

What I'm trying to say is this: Change up the format. I don't really see jokes in this, just a plot. Aside from "I don't like this place. It's really white," there is little here that really makes me want to read further. I don't know if you're going for pure plot or not, or if there's a massive joke at the end I'm not aware of. Is there a joke? And if so, is it worth the commitment? Ask yourself these questions as you figure out your plot formula. A nice payoff every three or four comics will hook more potential readers.

Holy bejeezus, you remind me of me when I was your age. Which makes me feel old. Except that I'm not old. In any case, keep making comics regardless of whether you take my advice or not.

And ALWAYS use the blue laser/green ninja star combo. It's the best weapon in the game.

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the kid's getting old, the kid's getting old

2-24-06 5:29pm (new)
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SPAgentJackBauer24
Pink Donkey Wrangler

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I had never meant "The Newsroom" to be funny. At first I did, but then I thought what the heck, let's make it a News show.

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I'm at The-Geek. The-Geek is my home. thegeek is the maker of The-Geek. I know that's complex.

2-24-06 9:54pm (new)
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LuckyGuess
hm

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In other words, "It was supposed to be funny but I changed my mind." Nothing wrong with that. Although now I'm more interested to see how the series turns out.

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the kid's getting old, the kid's getting old

2-24-06 11:15pm (new)
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SPAgentJackBauer24
Pink Donkey Wrangler

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Well, that's going to be a while before it ends. I'll probably have at least 100 episodes.

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I'm at The-Geek. The-Geek is my home. thegeek is the maker of The-Geek. I know that's complex.

2-25-06 10:00am (new)
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SPAgentJackBauer24
Pink Donkey Wrangler

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Episodes XII and XIII (that's it for Roman Numerals, I don't know any more):

[Click to view comic: 'The Newsroom: Episode 12: Madness on Maurice's Show']

[Click to view comic: 'The Newsroom: Episode 13: The End of Maurice's Show']

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I'm at The-Geek. The-Geek is my home. thegeek is the maker of The-Geek. I know that's complex.

2-25-06 10:52am (new)
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LuckyGuess
hm

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How quaint.

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the kid's getting old, the kid's getting old

2-25-06 3:29pm (new)
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SPAgentJackBauer24
Pink Donkey Wrangler

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Here's Episode 14:

[Click to view comic: 'The Newsroom: Episode 14: Liam and Leiza are Introduced']

And, before you ask, no, Leiza and Liam will not be here as long as Maurice. As for Leiza, I don't know her first, middle or last name, and, even if I did, I don't think she'd like it if I disclosed it. Liam is a random person, and, Maurice is from GTA: Vice City. Listen to the station VCPR (In-Between VROCK and ESPANTOSO), and "Pressing Issues" will be on. It says all of the things about Maurice being a clown etc. (look in "The Newsroom: Episode 6: 28, and 28 mentions that Maurice sucked as a clown, but is great as a Radio-Show Host).

Planned Time for Liam and Leiza:

Leiza: 4 more Episodes

Liam: 4 more Episodes

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I'm at The-Geek. The-Geek is my home. thegeek is the maker of The-Geek. I know that's complex.

2-25-06 5:20pm (new)
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SPAgentJackBauer24
Pink Donkey Wrangler

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Episode 15:

[Click to view comic: 'The Newsroom: Episode 15: Happy 15th Anniversary!']

15 EPISODES ALREADY! HAPPY 15TH TO "THE NEWSROOM"!!!

But, LuckyGuess made a longer series. He's strung together BitchCraft, Muffin?, Message Machine, Battle For Middle Earth, and more names into one comic. That's about 100 episodes (I think).

Planned times for Leiza and Liam:

Leiza: 4
3 more Episodes

Liam: 4
3 more Episodes

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I'm at The-Geek. The-Geek is my home. thegeek is the maker of The-Geek. I know that's complex.

2-25-06 8:45pm (new)
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SPAgentJackBauer24
Pink Donkey Wrangler

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Episode 16:

[Click to view comic: 'The Newsroom: Episode 16: BREAKING NEWS: Wrong Surgery']

This is probably the saddest one.

Leiza and Liam are, as you can see, not in this one, so they still have 3 episodes to go.

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I'm at The-Geek. The-Geek is my home. thegeek is the maker of The-Geek. I know that's complex.

2-26-06 1:36pm (new)
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LuckyGuess
hm

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Eh? "Muffin?" and "Message Machine" are two seperate serieses. Series. Whatever. And neither is longer than 25 comics. I think MM might only BE 25 comics. And BitchCraft and BFME are individual gamer comics that aren't in any sets. Or at least they shouldn't be in any sets. I should look into that.

The set that might have somewhere near 100 is "Sets That Didn't Quite Make It." And that's just a bunch of sets in one set. I've never made any single set go on that long, mainly because I run out of directions for the set to go.

Not trying to undermine you, just want to get the facts straight.

And I would seriously consider branching out and trying new types of comics if I were you. But hey, whatever floats your boat.

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2-26-06 6:21pm (new)
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Humpenstein
Born again virgin

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"I made a cut into his body when all his blood exploded out of his body"

This is probably the saddest one.


Twas' a tragic story of exploding body cuts.

2-26-06 8:54pm (new)
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SPAgentJackBauer24
Pink Donkey Wrangler

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Episode 17:

[Click to view comic: 'The Newsroom: Episode 17: BREAKING NEWS: Jill Carroll']

Episode 18 won't be for a while! It'll be a Two-Part one, though! So hold on to your hats!

Planned Times for Leiza and Liam:

Leiza: 4
3
2 Episodes to go

Liam: 4
3
2 Episodes to go

Note: Jill Carroll is/was a real person that was kidnapped in Iraq, and her deadline of her being killed unless the US did what the kidnappers said WAS yesterday, and nobody knows whether or not the kidnappers killed her.

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I'm at The-Geek. The-Geek is my home. thegeek is the maker of The-Geek. I know that's complex.

2-27-06 11:44am (new)
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