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Beaz
Freek-A-Leek

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I'm posting this in both "comic showoff" forums. I'd really just like to get as much feedback as possible. Are these entertaining to you? If so, why? If not, why?

I like making them, but I want you to like reading them. Let me know if I should take a different direction.

The I.T. Job 5 by Beaz
1-06-04
Tuesday - 8:45am - In the phone line closet...
I don't understand how Network administrator equates to telephone technician...
Sure. We both use cables and wires...
Apparently there is some static on the line that I can fix.
...phones make beep and boop noises... like computers.
Computer do emit LIGHT though. Crap I can't see a thing.
Oof!
Found the phone wires.

1-06-04 7:54am (new)
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jes_lawson
I don't know what I'm doing either

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I liked this - keep 'em coming.

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Please replace the handset, and try again.

1-06-04 4:01pm (new)
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Matchbook_Romance
Going. Coming.

Member Rated:

I as well enjoyed it and the rest of your IT series.

1-06-04 4:54pm (new)
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dcomposed
C3H5N3O9

Member Rated:

I liked it also wangs dongs.

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Batman created by Bob Kane

1-06-04 7:58pm (new)
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attitudechicka
is never bored.

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This particular comic was funny, however I'd lose the narration boxes. The last one, at least, is completely unnecessary, but I suppose you used it more for "balance"?

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Mediocrity at its most average.

1-07-04 7:50am (new)
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Beaz
Freek-A-Leek

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Yeah, I've received some comments on the narration boxes, so I'm trying to stay aware of it now and use them less.

Thanks for the compliment. Please check out my other ones too :)

1-07-04 8:12am (new)
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