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switch263
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2-19-07 11:21pm (new)
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not_Scyess
not laughing with you

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You do suck.

But maybe not terminally.

The first comic you posted is a common first comic among people new to the site.  They thing by switching the art around and making "woah, things are different in this panel" comments that comedy is somehow acheived.  They you -- are horribly wrong.

Your second comic has potential, but I'd suggest a minor change to the middle panel:

A Tweak to Comic 383998 by not_Scyess
2-20-07
AHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!
AHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!

Your third comic is actually not bad.  There's kind of too much going on, though; you could make it into two or three funny comics.

Number four is also pretty good.  You need some more background on why a goth and a pirate are standing around the water cooler, though.

Once you learn the difference between nonsense and funny, you'll be in good shape.  Keep trying.

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2-20-07 7:00am (new)
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UnknownEric
and the Goblet of Mountain Dew.

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Yeah, the fourth one amused me because it's just the right kind of complete random humor. The rest could use some work.

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2-20-07 8:31am (new)
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boorite
crazy knife lady

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I was amused by them all.

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2-20-07 11:27am (new)
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LuckyGuess
hm

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I am amused by kites.

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the kid's getting old, the kid's getting old

2-20-07 12:59pm (new)
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0401040
Has serious reservations about reality

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I am bemused by tights.

And these strips.

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The tongue licking the ars of pretension.

2-20-07 2:19pm (new)
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myles1890
Member - Tobor Fan Club

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I liked the first and third one.  But work a little differently, okay?  You're doing better than I did!

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2-21-07 6:37am (new)
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finn34
King of Deadlines

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ugh. please stop pandering to this person.

try harder. you can be funny. trust me, i used to be un-funny. and now look at me. dozens of laughs later...

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2-21-07 10:04pm (new)
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boorite
crazy knife lady

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finn34

But then we'd be pandering to you. I think we should be free to choose who we pander to, and I want to pander to this new guy I've never met before.

Also, I hate your favorite band, which is Hootie and the Blowfish. Holy shit, could they possibly suck more?

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2-22-07 6:55pm (new)
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finn34
King of Deadlines

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boorite

But then we'd be pandering to you. I think we should be free to choose who we pander to, and I want to pander to this new guy I've never met before.

Also, I hate your favorite band, which is Hootie and the Blowfish. Holy shit, could they possibly suck more?


 

*sigh* no one will ever understand my love of hootie.

but you're right about one thing ... maybe my post was in haste. please, pander away.

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2-22-07 11:00pm (new)
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crackpanther
Recreational User

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2-23-07 5:10am (new)
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boorite
crazy knife lady

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finn34

No, I thought you were right. I just wanted to feel naughty.

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2-23-07 12:11pm (new)
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