Iva Biggun, comic consultant, begins retooling the strip: "Okay guys, first you have to get a background. This minimalist stuff never works. It's not believable."
And a burning bush talking to a squirrel in a warehouse is?
Yeah but you should check out the honey on this calendar!
"The way you two talk is pretty boring. Its the 21st century. The 'Connected Generation'. Live the dotcom fallout! Hacker speak. Obscure references...now read the script I gave you and work it."
"Finally if you want to appeal to that target SC audience you have to have an edge. Racial comments, slurs with some sex jargon thrown in. None of this subtle stuff. Go for it."
Let's see here, lost my place....ok: "we dont like...lets see...blacks, whites, hispanics, asians, jews, arabs, gays and and....uh....Canadians, b330tch?"
*Ahem* "PENIS PENIS PENIS. FUCK FUCK FUCK. SHIT SHIT SH..." Oh come on, this goes on for another 5 pages!
