I think it's pretty funny...

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More lust than you can shake a stick at.

I love the idea of this one... but the first panel doesn't seem to go with the rest of it. You could do more than just set up the joke... maybe make space guy say something that reinforces his confusion in the second panel.

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peddling the funny around since 09/24/2002

Worked for me.

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...Trot and Cap'n Bill were free from anxiety and care. Button-Bright never worried about anything. The Scarecrow, not being able to sleep, looked out of the window and tried to count the stars.

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I love the idea of this one... but the first panel doesn't seem to go with the rest of it. You could do more than just set up the joke... maybe make space guy say something that reinforces his confusion in the second panel.

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I made another one. I based it off my friend in real life.

[Click to view comic: 'Erotica']" />

Eh? Eh?

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More lust than you can shake a stick at.

Again, I like the idea, but the punchline doens't quite make. The first panel definitely sets us up for something sneaky, but just saying the word "semen" isn't really sneaky. I think there are two things you can do with this.

Have blue say something actually sneaky, like "I heard that when people come here, they semen cunt fall blow job losses of 69% at an anal-ized rate." (It's not perfect, but hopefully you get the idea.)

The other thing you can do is to have the geek react in some way that's amusing, like, "Sneaky, but do you really find semen erotic?" Or "Oh. I see your point."

Sorry if I seem to be overly analytical, but, well, that's kind of what I do here.

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peddling the funny around since 09/24/2002

OK, OK, OK. What about this one?

[Click to view comic: 'A New Type of Segregation']" />

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More lust than you can shake a stick at.

I think the lord of Anti-Scyess is off his rocker, both of those first two comics are great. The third one is the David Bowie of comic strips. I'm not really sure what that means. I like David Bowie though, so it's probably related in some way to a positive comment.

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It's grime time.

lol I really like the third one! the other 2 had potential so gj and keep it up!

Thanks doods. But I need help with something. Would the third one be better if I added a line in the last panel where the bartender says, "Oh yeah, me and him got one for the blacks by ourselves a few weeks ago."

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More lust than you can shake a stick at.

And while yous guys are chewing on that, I made another comic I thought up last night.

[Click to view comic: 'Mrs. Shaw']" />

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More lust than you can shake a stick at.

I liked them all. The erotic punchline was funny, I liked that strip the best.

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Your mickey mouse kung fu is no match for my superior fighting style.

Mrs. Shaw was great too. Gimme some more!

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It's grime time.

I also thought Mrs. Shaw was very good. Some of us old farts might have gone with the name Mrs. Moorehead as a tip of the hat to Rod Serling (who memorably played on that idea), but I ain't complaining.

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I thought they got better as they went on, with the last one making me laugh out loud =)

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"If you can't keep it in your pants, keep it in your family"

I think New Type of Segregation is great. The Mrs. Shaw comic is good but the joke is a little overused. But you're getting better, I'd say. (Based on only four comics, mind you.)

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peddling the funny around since 09/24/2002

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More lust than you can shake a stick at.

My name is Jeff, so that one comic just jarred me to the core.

Your comics are pretty durn good.

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8===D

Thanks.
[Click to view comic: 'Mood Music']" />

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More lust than you can shake a stick at.

And another one using this Tobor guy.

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More lust than you can shake a stick at.

Mood Music was great. Great "thinking outside the box". and that last one made me smirk. but then again, i think its virtually impossible to ruin a strip where TOBOR CORNHOLES!!

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There was once a man who said:"nothing is true!". Although later it was found out that he was lying.

That's true. They come pre-ruined.

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peddling the funny around since 09/24/2002

XD very true, non scyess.

Today's featured stip contains an ACTUAL conversation from between me and my popular friend, Kyle, and my HORRIBLY unpopular friend, Johnny. I just added the very last line for effect.

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More lust than you can shake a stick at.

The last line makes it... a good comic!

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peddling the funny around since 09/24/2002

Really? Good enough for you to finally rate me, maybe? =D

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More lust than you can shake a stick at.