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Slice
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http://www.stripcreator.com/comics/Slice/
Check them out and tell me what you think! Thanks!

5-24-05 9:08pm (new)
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Hari_Nezumi
Streeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeetch

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You lied to me. You said some where lame. Pretty much all of them were lame. And now you're oging to hell for lying. Good job.

[Click to view comic: 'Cigarettes kill! >>LAME!']

Ok, this one would be good if it wasn't for the last line the cigarette says.

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5-25-05 8:02am (new)
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not_Scyess
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I disagree. I think it's great the way it is.

But I'm still too lazy to look at the rest. Post some more into the thread, Slice.

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peddling the funny around since 09/24/2002

5-25-05 8:31am (new)
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Slice
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Thanks, not_Scyess! And uh, Mr. Hari Nezumi, I didn't mean to lie to you...sniff... Spare me please? Please don't send me to hell? And thanks for the comment, I appreciated that one too! (A little less than the other one, but still)

[Click to view comic: 'Petey McGrimble on : Monogamy']
[Click to view comic: 'Timmy The Homicidal Toolman']
[Click to view comic: 'Petey and Timmy doing what they do best..']

5-25-05 9:08am (new)
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not_Scyess
not laughing with you

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I liked "Monogamy," but you should've used blonde-1-l instead of blonde-2-l. I don't think she should be smiling -- especially with a big smile.

The toolman comic was good but it's easy to see the joke coming. Maybe a funny comment from perm would help it a long.

The "Petey and Timmy" comic wasn't good. You used two panels setting up the fact that they wanted to be a pirate and a killer, and then the punch line was a lame and irrelevant put-down. No good.

In general though I think you're pretty good. Keep at it.

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5-25-05 9:15am (new)
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kryptiX
Stripcreator Newbie

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Sounds like not_Scyess knows what he's talking about.
I agree.

5-25-05 9:25am (new)
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Hari_Nezumi
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I agree with not_Sycess about al but the carpentder one. I think it's great the way it is. Make more like that one and you'll be terrific.

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5-25-05 9:31am (new)
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Slice
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5-25-05 4:04pm (new)
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Hari_Nezumi
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Usually, when one sucks as badly as you do, and they keep at it, I see it as perserverance. But with you, it's just annoying for some reason.

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More lust than you can shake a stick at.

5-25-05 6:03pm (new)
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andydougan
Film critic subordinaire

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Despite being responsible for this, Hari keeps attacking all the other newbies. That takes balls.

"Cigarettes", "Monogamy" and "Stereotypes" are quite good. The others aren't, but none of them are really terrible.

5-25-05 6:57pm (new)
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Slice
Junior Comic Technician

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I don't know why Hari_Nezumi hates me so much, I mean, I may SUCK and all, but...why do you keep reading my comics then? Your behaviour puzzles me, oh great king of everything :|

5-25-05 8:36pm (new)
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Hari_Nezumi
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Despite being responsible for this, Hari keeps attacking all the other newbies. That takes balls.

"Cigarettes", "Monogamy" and "Stereotypes" are quite good. The others aren't, but none of them are really terrible.


Hey, I was young I didn't know what I was doing!

Anyway, I don't hate YOU, I just don't think you're very funny. I'm sure you'll probably get better EVENTUALY. Everyone does.

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5-26-05 6:47am (new)
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Hari_Nezumi
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And hey, I don't attack NEWBS per say, just people who aren't good.

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5-26-05 6:51am (new)
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Slice
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Well, there are other people who DO seem to enjoy my comics, so I guess that means that your OPINION is that I suck. Say it with me; O-PIN-I-ON. Hmmmm.... ever heard of that? It varies per person....

5-26-05 10:04am (new)
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Hari_Nezumi
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O_O Funny, you tell me that as though I didn't just say it...huh...

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More lust than you can shake a stick at.

5-26-05 10:54am (new)
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Slice
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And I quote; "And hey, I don't attack NEWBS per say, just people who aren't good. "

So you were saying I'm not good while you should have been saying you don't think that i'm good (or rather, my comics, or whatever).. Hmm...

5-26-05 11:06am (new)
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Hari_Nezumi
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Um...OK...OR you could NOT take everything so literally...

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More lust than you can shake a stick at.

5-27-05 11:50am (new)
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Slice
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Sorry... I was raised that way, the teachings of my parents got the best of me... I apologize... ^o)

5-27-05 3:41pm (new)
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scardycrow
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the line about cigarettes killing your father and raping your mother was totally stolen from family guy.

yeah nice try

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5-27-05 7:17pm (new)
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Slice
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Yes. Totally. Completely. You are 100% correct. And that complete post of yours was made out of words

5-28-05 4:33pm (new)
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Slice
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... from the english language. I'm calling God right now to get you sued.

5-29-05 8:19am (new)
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Hari_Nezumi
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[Click to view comic: 'to quit or not to quit. probably the latter.']

Scardy, if that's not taken from The Simpsons, I don't know what is.

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More lust than you can shake a stick at.

5-29-05 11:34am (new)
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Slice
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6-12-05 11:40pm (new)
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Melkor
Member - Tobor Fan Club

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For some strange, orwellian, reason, i like Q. Though you do have a tendency to be long winded...

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There was once a man who said:"nothing is true!". Although later it was found out that he was lying.

6-13-05 3:51pm (new)
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Hari_Nezumi
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GODDAMMIT SLICE!!! You've made a character I actually like. Q is cool...grrr...damn you, Slice! DAMN YOU!!!

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6-13-05 3:59pm (new)
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