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Check out this new comic I made, based on the WEB RPG Kings of Chaos.

I'm afraid I don't know much about Kings of Chaos, so much of the humour is probably lost on my ignorance. However, I can suggest that you use less narration, especially that which only consists of a small title. We can see how the story is progressing without a synopsis at the top.

Welcome, and keep stripping!

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Carry the battle to them. Don't let them bring it to you. Put them on the defensive. And don't ever apologize for anything. - Harry S Truman, 33rd president of US (1884 - 1972)

Thanks for the comments, and I agree, unless you've played the game before the humor will not be understood. www.kingsofchaos.com That's the main website if you wish to learn more about it, again, thanks alot for the feedback!

I have a friend that plays KOC, but... meh, I agree... use less narration.

Another thing I realized, a lot of the humor comes from insides jokes that my friends have. Heh, if you knew them in real life, you would see that I'm sulting some of them pretty bad.