http://www.stripcreator.com/view.php?author=Erico
PG13

stop with the excessive naration. Stop naration altogether. If you need naration to explain what is going on, it probably isn't very good to start with.

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There's a fine line between visionary and wacko ~ greinhart

hmmm.....how should i put this.......they suck? wait yea that's what i meant to say.....yea they suck....

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No.

You better listen to him. After reading his, I would say we have an expert on teh suck

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There's a fine line between visionary and wacko ~ greinhart

The aim of my comics are to entretain a small group of people and I guess its impossible for the ones outside of that group to understand most jokes.
The ones who understood the jokes tought it was pretty good.
I don't understand why it is a bad thing to use narration. How do you do complex history strips without the use of narration?

I liked them. The problem with narration is that some people use it to state the obvious. You know, they'll have two people talking and the narration will say "Here are two people talking". That's not what you've done, though, you've gone for a kind of Far Side caption thing and it works. Just ignore the knee-jerk reactions of those guys up there.