ok... constructive criticism time... not bad for a beginner, the only not so great things would have to be the over narrating and the Use Of Capitals For Every First Letter Of A Word. Spelling is also fun, unless you purposely misspell things... But, other than that, just give'r and if it makes you happy, then that's all that matters.
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Okay, Lindsay, are you forgetting that I was a professional twice over - an analyst and a therapist. The world's first analrapist.
