Read my comics and see what you think. Feel free to comment on them.

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Crap.

I read them all. 10 minutes of my life I will never get back.

Seriously - lose the narration boxes. They add nothing, and distract from the comics themselves. Your characters should be able to support the strip without a narrator to explain what is going on.

Otherwise - meh.

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There's a fine line between visionary and wacko ~ greinhart