Behind the Curtain by alanaldaismydad 9-25-03

Hey, Universe? Why can't I see you? Well, speck of all specks, it is because I am everything and nothing. My true form would cause you very soul to implode with the impossibility of what I am. Come on. Just a peek. I'll give $10. Well, ok, just a peek. You're a chair?!? BEHOLD THE MIGHTY IMAGE OF THE UNIVERSE. GAZE AT THE WONDER OF EXISTENCE! REVEL IN THE IMAGE OF ONE WHO DECIDES ALL LIFE AND DEATH! The plush seat's really comfortable, too. Now, pay up.

I thought the comic was fairly ok, but your ending didn't fit it. Maybe less wording in the ending, cutting it off quickly before it gets boring. Just some words of advice from my personal experience, good job and keep up the Stripping! =D