There pretty bad.....thers
Freakin
Freakin Part 2
Freakin 3
Dimension
Jinko

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HOLY CRAP!!!

Pleez.... I made more i know there crappy but i wanna know if other peepz are readin them

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I didn't enjoy reading these. But atleast they're better than the Dragon Ball Z Halloween thing. Those were painful. Anyway, the real problem was your use of the words "freakin'" and "crap" so often. As much as I agree that those pseudo swear words are better than the real thing, which would have made it even worse, I was surprised that you wouldn't see that detracting from the overall experiance of reading this. There were interesting ideas mixed about in there but overall it was pretty poor.

Freakin 3 by DaBeat98889 11-02-03

Oh my freakin god..... Put some pants on, i dont allow nudists in my household! Fine i'll freakin burn freakin you and your freakin cat! I have some pants ontop of the dresser over there. DIE!!!!! Who the heck are you!

Dimension by DaBeat98889 11-02-03

Errrrr..... Sorry did i say paralell?, i met to say alternate Ill take the dimension...no death...no wait dimesion Dang...i guess no killin today... Okay alternate dimension it is!, Jinko!!!!

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k thanks for your opinion!

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any one else? pleez?

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:lol