I'm 11 years old and want to be a real cartoonist when I grow up. This site rocks! I'd love some feedback on my strips. Thanks in advance. You guys are awsome! :D

Devil's Due by Tobin 3-27-04

Devil dude, I challenge you to a deul. If I win you have to be my best friend forever. Sure, but if I win, I get your soul. You suck at chess! I just won. Damn, I have to hang around with a punk like you for all eternity. What the...? I didn't say you could turn me into stuff. Much improved. What do you got to eat around here?

Devil's Due 2 by Tobin 3-27-04

I can't believe you turned me into a monkey! Turn me back into a human. If you wanna hang with the big boys, you gotta take the heat. Quit it, dude. It burns! If were going to be friends, you've got to go grocery shopping. Argggg! I'm a chick! Chicks know how to cook.

Smoker's Dilema by Tobin 3-27-04

Dillion here is quiting smoking, and is starting to see things. Smoke me, I beg of you! Go to Hell! Dillon is facing his cravings with great effort and has succeded. For now.... You ......... That's right, burn! Come Back!

Thats the good stuff

Thanks for reading. :) Here's some more.

Hardly Working by Tobin 3-27-04

These two brothers are working very hard on remodeling their house. Hey Bob, you know that shelf I was bulding for you? Yeah, why? I was swinging the hammer and well.... What? I missed...... I'll get the Bactine.

Devil's Due 3 by Tobin 3-27-04

I wonder if I shouldn't spend at least a day as a girl. To see what it's like. Will you go out with me? Okay, that's long enough. My friend Dillon just ditched me. Don't you feel sorry for me? Chris, I'm Dillon. I've been changed into a girl by the devil. If you didn't want to go out with me, you could have just said, "no thanks."

Here's some more Devil's Due

Devil's Due 4 by Tobin 3-27-04

There! You big baby! That was weird.... Let's not do that again, shall we? All right, are you up for a buffet? I know of one near here. I'm ditching him...next chance I get. We'll go dutch.

That's some really good stuff for being just 11 O.o
I'm-a putting you on my favorites. Yes.

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Number 3 is hilarious!

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I will rate you hard, and unendingly.

Last one in this series.... or is it just the beginning?

Devil's Due 5 by Tobin 3-27-04

I'll challenge you again. If you win, you can go free. If I win, I get your super powers. I accept. Dude, you totally suck at chess. I really tried that time. For my first act, I'll turn you into... This outta shake things up!

Not too bad, but they totally remind me of Grim & Evil on the Cartoon Network.

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The giant three-phallused phallus of Uzbekistan will one day squirt the cosmic jizz of revenge all over Canada.

Here's a few new ones. Thanks for all the comments.

Detective Simmons by Tobin 3-28-04

Capn' Pete is getting desperate. Mee treasure is missing! I want to file a complaint. I'll do everything I can to help... Detective Simmons has other plans... After I find that moron's treasure, me and the wife will move to the Hamptons! If you spin my bundle of straw into to gold, I'll go halvsies with you! It's just not Detective Simmon's day. All right, I've got some time.

2B or not 2B by Tobin 3-28-04

I'm lonely....I need someone to love. I'm taken... You can have my old girlfriend, however. Hi there. I guess I'll take a chance on love. Bring it on.

you're eleven?!
What do they feed kids these days?

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There was once a man who said:"nothing is true!". Although later it was found out that he was lying.

Those were good. Yes, quite good indeed. I liked DD #4 the most.

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It's grime time.

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you're eleven?!
What do they feed kids these days?

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dont forget ketchup flavored wheaties.

Mmm...
Ketchup flavored wheaties...

Right

Same situation here, wtih age and "aspiring" (ooo! Big word) thinger too.

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PRAISE ME! I! AM THE RULER... OF THE UNI- aw damn a dog crapped on my shoe.

...How silly of me. How could I have forgotten that staple of american living....

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"aspiring" thinger too?!
What do they teach kids these days?

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There was once a man who said:"nothing is true!". Although later it was found out that he was lying.

The chemical reactions of babboon brains and ketchup flavored wheaties

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PRAISE ME! I! AM THE RULER... OF THE UNI- aw damn a dog crapped on my shoe.

Thanks for all the great comments. I'm cooking up some more for ya.

More ketchup flavored wheaties?

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I will rate you hard, and unendingly.