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FatJordan
Stripcreator Newbie

Hey all -

I'm new to the site, and it was suggested to me that I post in the forum to get people to notice my comic. Maybe I'll enter some contests in a few days when inspiration hits, but until then...here's a sampling of mine. And if you like it, check out my others.

I Love Cable TV by FatJordan
4-13-04
Boo-yah! Only 45 more minutes until The Shield is on!
BIGunitJOHN: It's gonna kick ass. Is FX running the Bush speech?
Hold up a second. Let me check.
Ironically enough, they are showing the Will Smith classic, Enemy Of The State

4-18-04 7:11pm (new)
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attitudechicka
is never bored.

Member Rated:

1. It's got potential. Not unhumorous, just not gripping.

2. Is that true?

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Mediocrity at its most average.

4-18-04 8:06pm (new)
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FatJordan
Stripcreator Newbie

Member Rated:

Yeah, that actually happened.

I'm planning on keeping all my comics true unless it's not featuring "myself" or any of my friends (who will be introduced over time) in addition to contest entries. I just picked a comic at random to post here, especially since my latest have been kind of depressing. But, yeah...some of my others are better, all matters what kind of humor you are into, I'm trying to hit it all.

Here's another one...my first actually. It's by far the truest.

Punk At Its Finest by FatJordan
4-12-04
Hey Chris, I just downloaded the new Bad Religion!
Really? What's it like?
Have you heard any of their other albums?
Yeah.
You already know.

4-18-04 8:28pm (new)
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evil_d
Riding through your town with his head on fire

Member Rated:

You seem to have promise. The two you posted are your best so far, I think.

A couple of them:

The Sad Thing Is That I've Seen It by FatJordan
4-15-04
Hey Jon, what did you think of my newest comic?
14 Minutes Later...
What do you think? Not so good?
Shoe999: Oh sorry. I'm watching Ninja Turtle porn.

This Is A Cry For Help. Or Girls. by FatJordan
4-18-04
Dude, I'm so sick of girls.
Dude, don't say that.
No, for real. I don't think there's such a thing as true love anymore. I mean, 50% of marriage ends in divorce.
One minute later...
Stop making me so depressed.

started out good, but might have benefitted by not being so true to life. What I mean is that the endings were probably funny when they happened, but don't work so well in this medium. So don't be afraid to embellish a bit.

Welcome to the site.

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The what mentioned above is total fiction. Please don't take it seriously!

4-18-04 10:26pm (new)
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FatJordan
Stripcreator Newbie

Member Rated:

Hey, thanks alot, I was thinking about swaying away from complete reality, but I haven't yet. Maybe I will soon. The other thing I don't really want to do it spread my comics out. The one I just wrote would have benefitted from 6, but I think that would have been too long. So I just kept it at 3. Here it is:

I Love My School by FatJordan
4-19-04
Oh man, look at this one. It's for a facial!
Haha. Silent auctions are awesome.
Inspiration strikes our hero!
Hey, if you bid on the facial and lose, I'll hook you up with one for free!
Nice try, ass.
Inspiration strikes our hero...again!
Hey, if you bid on the facial and lose, I'll hook you up with one for free!
Oh Jordan! You're the sweetest!

4-19-04 12:39pm (new)
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