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PsycicPsyco2
Stripcreator Newbie

Howdy...
I often get a lot of good comments on my comics, and I'll probably be registering another account soon and I wanted to know which ones are the best and should be put on my new account...

Also, most of them are about a forum I visit...

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4-19-04 10:45am (new)
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possums
FERN DESTROYER

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cant spell psycho or psychic... I'm gonna let that slide.

however your comics totally blow ass. "You're gay," is not a funny punchline.

4-19-04 12:22pm (new)
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evil_d
Riding through your town with his head on fire

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Agreed; you need some work. Some of your comics have funny bits at the beginning, but end badly because you don't know what to do anymore. In "Teenage Boys", the real punchline is on the left in the second panel. Don't feel like you have to use every dialogue bubble... if you've only got three lines, for example, put one in each panel.

Your Penny Arcade strips... I don't know what the deal is with them. They'd be unrecognizeable as jokes about PA if you hadn't told us they were supposed to be. Some of your other strips have the same problem... they seem to be making fun of something, but I can't figure out what it is. My advice is to think harder about what's funny about your subject before you start writing.

These comics show some wit:

Chat Room Beginner by PsycicPsyco2
12-21-03
Erm, hello all. I'm new!
What do you mean LOL? What is LOL?
What? What the hell is ROFL?
This is getting crazy now! What the hell do you mean by OMFG?
GAAAHHHH! I hate this place!
Hee-Hee! Giggle! WIERDO! Hee-heee! giggle

Teenage Girl's Christmas! by PsycicPsyco2
12-29-03
And I got a new mobile, and a bracelet, and another handbag, and a Winnie The Pooh teddy, and 6 mobile phone covers, 18 ringtones, 15 music CDs, 12 Busted posters, 9 calenders...
Wow, you certainly got a lot!
SHUT UP!!! I also got 7 keyrings, boy band DVDs, 16 Winnie the Pooh DVDs, a little blue bag, a little pink bag, a slightly larger white bag, 18 new mobile games, 23 new logos...
676 Habbo Hotel Credits, Habbo Club Membership, a Hello Kitty bag, a fluffy puffy thing for my hamster, a new hamster cage, a hair straightener, hairdryer, loads of make-up...
You must have had a great Christmas then!
NO WAY! Where were my webcams, mobile phone camera, N-Gage (yes, N-Gage), 16 shampoos, conditioners, little blue mousemat, hair styler, anything with Babyliss on it!!! I HAD AN AWFUL CHRISTMAS! Sob...

Both show good structure and end with an actual humorous punchline. The latter, in fact, is funny throughout.

Keep at it, and good luck. Oh, and don't rewrite your comics with your new account. Just put a link to the old account in your profile or favorites.

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The what mentioned above is total fiction. Please don't take it seriously!

4-19-04 7:22pm (new)
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biped
Mr. Wonderful

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I recently did a Habbo Hotel spoof called "Blabbo Hotel." I thought it was really funny the way I replaced the word "Habbo" with the word "Blabbo."

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Legend, oh legend, the third wheel legend...always in the way.

4-19-04 7:36pm (new)
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NooniePuuBunny
Horny Female Tentacled Kaiju from Outer Space

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Oh shut the bobba up...

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I will rate you hard, and unendingly.

4-19-04 7:54pm (new)
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biped
Mr. Wonderful

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Legend, oh legend, the third wheel legend...always in the way.

4-19-04 7:58pm (new)
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PsycicPsyco2
Stripcreator Newbie

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The "You're Gay" stuff is part of stereotyping the teenagers. You'll probably find today that "you're gay" is the most common insult from teenage boys today...

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4-21-04 10:38am (new)
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boinky33
I'm with stupid ^

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The "You're Gay" stuff is part of stereotyping the teenagers. You'll probably find today that "you're gay" is the most common insult from teenage boys today...


I call people pulsating cunts of fury!

4-21-04 10:40am (new)
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MikeyG
Shoots the shit and often misses

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The "You're Gay" stuff is part of stereotyping the teenagers. You'll probably find today that "you're gay" is the most common insult from teenage boys today...


You're gay!

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The giant three-phallused phallus of Uzbekistan will one day squirt the cosmic jizz of revenge all over Canada.

4-21-04 11:11am (new)
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xxausrottenxx
Sock of the walk

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you're gayer

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4-21-04 1:02pm (new)
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biped
Mr. Wonderful

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biped has entered the room.

biped: u r all gay

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Legend, oh legend, the third wheel legend...always in the way.

4-21-04 1:37pm (new)
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NooniePuuBunny
Horny Female Tentacled Kaiju from Outer Space

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I have a friend named Jim.
Just so he knows I'm talking to him...
I say "HEY JIM!!!"
Thats how he knows I'm talking to him.

:)

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I will rate you hard, and unendingly.

4-21-04 7:06pm (new)
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