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Trojangrind
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Circumstances #6 by Trojangrind
4-24-04
So I understand you want a full makeover? That's face lift, tummy tuck, the works?
Yes, that's right.
I'd just like to ask you a question before we begin, for social reasons then we can get to work: Why do you want this change?
Well it's simple doc, I want a look that will turn heads. I want people after me. I want excitement!
A Few Hours Later...
So?

The first Circumstances #8 is messed up so ignore it.

If you can rate, please do. Good or bad, any feedback is great.

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Open your eyes, Open your mind Proud like a God, Don't pretend to be blind Trapped in yourself, Break out instead Beat the machines that work in your head

4-25-04 10:10am (new)
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xxausrottenxx
Sock of the walk

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very enjoyable

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xx( o Y o. )xx

4-25-04 10:19am (new)
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Trojangrind
Stripcreator Newbie

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Thanks aus

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Open your eyes, Open your mind Proud like a God, Don't pretend to be blind Trapped in yourself, Break out instead Beat the machines that work in your head

4-25-04 10:27am (new)
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Mr. Wonderful

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I think that in the last panel, the boy should've said, "What happened? You turned me from a Caucasian into an African-American!", or, "Hey! It wasn't my intention to change from one race into a different one! Why did you do that?" Then you would have fully explored the comic potential of the situation.

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Legend, oh legend, the third wheel legend...always in the way.

4-25-04 10:30am (new)
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Trojangrind
Stripcreator Newbie

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O_o

...that's sarcasm right? Because that's what it meant.

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Open your eyes, Open your mind Proud like a God, Don't pretend to be blind Trapped in yourself, Break out instead Beat the machines that work in your head

4-25-04 10:36am (new)
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Mr. Wonderful

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O_o

...that's sarcasm right? Because that's what it meant.


Then why was he wearing different clothes? Did he go home and change before going into the machine, or did the machine somehow alter them along with his genetic makeup? You could've had him saying something like, "Hey! That was my favorite shirt!", or, "28? What does that signify, Professor?"

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Legend, oh legend, the third wheel legend...always in the way.

4-25-04 11:19am (new)
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Trojangrind
Stripcreator Newbie

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...there are limits to what you can and can't do on here man.

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Open your eyes, Open your mind Proud like a God, Don't pretend to be blind Trapped in yourself, Break out instead Beat the machines that work in your head

4-25-04 1:08pm (new)
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Mr. Wonderful

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Yes, but you can transcend those limitations with a simple narrative caption, such as, "Note: due to circumstances beyond my control, the shirt worn by one of the characters in the following comic will change unexpectedly into another shirt in the third panel. Please do not allow this to confuse you or detract from your enjoyment of this comic."

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Legend, oh legend, the third wheel legend...always in the way.

4-25-04 1:29pm (new)
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Trojangrind
Stripcreator Newbie

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...mmk. Chill out dude it's a comic.

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Open your eyes, Open your mind Proud like a God, Don't pretend to be blind Trapped in yourself, Break out instead Beat the machines that work in your head

4-25-04 4:00pm (new)
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Mr. Wonderful

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Yes, I enjoyed reading it and giving feedback on it.

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Legend, oh legend, the third wheel legend...always in the way.

4-25-04 4:17pm (new)
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Trojangrind
Stripcreator Newbie

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lol, thank you

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Open your eyes, Open your mind Proud like a God, Don't pretend to be blind Trapped in yourself, Break out instead Beat the machines that work in your head

4-25-04 4:24pm (new)
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MikeyG
Shoots the shit and often misses

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I give it a Meh's up.

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The giant three-phallused phallus of Uzbekistan will one day squirt the cosmic jizz of revenge all over Canada.

4-26-04 7:21am (new)
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NooniePuuBunny
Horny Female Tentacled Kaiju from Outer Space

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Did anyone ever notice that the professor sprite has blatant armpit stains?

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I will rate you hard, and unendingly.

4-26-04 8:09am (new)
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Trojangrind
Stripcreator Newbie

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o_O

You're right...

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Open your eyes, Open your mind Proud like a God, Don't pretend to be blind Trapped in yourself, Break out instead Beat the machines that work in your head

4-26-04 8:21am (new)
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theDROOLfool
Member - Tobor Fan Club

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It's wierd how we are so uniquely wired to see things differently. As for me i loved that the character had this extreme change. Without the words it gave me the opportunity to deal with the shock value and imagine what would take place in the situation. It also set it up for another cartoon to continue the story line. i would have hated if he spelled out he was different i.e., black/different shirt, etc. That was part of the edge to this cartoon and it's fun for ppl to fill in the blanks just so there is enough info to do that. i believe there was and if i could have rated this i would have give this cartoon very high marks.

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theDROOLfool drooooooools

4-28-04 8:30pm (new)
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Mr. Wonderful

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If a narrative caption had been used to explain them, such as "ATTENTION, READERS: The Professor's noticeable armpits stains are due to the fact that he has just finished masturbating to simian bestiality porn", then they wouldn't have been so distracting.

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Legend, oh legend, the third wheel legend...always in the way.

4-28-04 8:37pm (new)
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NooniePuuBunny
Horny Female Tentacled Kaiju from Outer Space

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If a narrative caption had been used to explain them, such as "ATTENTION, READERS: The Professor's noticeable armpits stains are due to the fact that he has just finished masturbating to simian bestiality porn", then they wouldn't have been so distracting.


How true.

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I will rate you hard, and unendingly.

4-28-04 8:58pm (new)
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