Hey, Im New But Check Out My Comics, My Mates Like Them. If You Like Em Why Dont You Put Me As A Favourite Artist in Your Profile, Thanks

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-A~L~E~X- -M~A~I~N~E- Taking Over Belfast

http://www.stripcreator.com/comics/MichaelMartin
thats the code to get to my Comics

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-A~L~E~X- -M~A~I~N~E- Taking Over Belfast

http://www.stripcreator.com/comics/MichaelMartin
thats the code to get to my Comics

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-A~L~E~X- -M~A~I~N~E- Taking Over Belfast

WAAAAAYYY too much unecessary narration. As a matter of fact, NONE of it is necessary. I am stifling the urge to chew the shit out of your comics, so appreciate that.

But start with the narration. Lose it and see how it goes.

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The giant three-phallused phallus of Uzbekistan will one day squirt the cosmic jizz of revenge all over Canada.

Too much narration, good basis for ideas. I epscially liked this:

Clones by MichaelMartin 6-20-04

What!!! Clones!? He Looks Familiar I Know Him From Somewhere Obviosly The Town Wasnt Big Enough For The Two Of Them DIE YOU FUCKING CLONE, DIE!!! Are Reindeers The Same? At Least We Arnt Like That God, I Want To Kill Him So Bad

Room for improvment, but good try.

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Is it wrong to laugh?

janm the fukkin yello out of the tops of yer comix, dude! Let the brain do some work for a change......
but keep it up, you'll get it.....lots of nerve asking to be made a fave so soooooooooon.....

Leave me alone, I'm eating at trash in the box.....

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Jump already....you said you would......

Aw, boinky, be nice!

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Is it wrong to laugh?

he Lvoes The Apocalypse by MichaelMartin 6-21-04

Hmmmmm... I Knew It Would Come Soon, Check My Shirt Oh, Shut Up!!! Great, More Bombs, This is So Cool Dont Worry My Friend, it Will Be Over Soon. Dont Say That, I Dont want it To End, Ive Been Waiting To See it For Ages, Let it Stay!!!

Try That Link, Its My New One
And What The hell Boinky, Im Only New

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-A~L~E~X- -M~A~I~N~E- Taking Over Belfast

This is my Newest Comic, Just A Quick One To Show That Fairys Never Shut Up

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-A~L~E~X- -M~A~I~N~E- Taking Over Belfast

Sorry That Didnt Work, Check My Comics, My New One is About A SAtupid Fairy

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-A~L~E~X- -M~A~I~N~E- Taking Over Belfast

Capitalizing Every Single Word Not Only Takes More Work, It Is Also Retarded, Stop That And Also Use Punctuation Other Than Commas And Your Comics Will Probably Get Better, Along With Your Conveyed Intelligence Level

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Blue is the color of victory.

Follow the advice above about punctuation and narration and stuff, and you will be on your way to funnier comics in no time! Also, before you hit "save", look at the comic for a minute or two and think of ways that it could be made funnier. You won't believe what fantastic ideas will pop into your head at the most unexpected moments!

I liked this line: "Im Not A Little Girl, Im A Pimp, And We Are At The bottom Of The Ocean."

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Legend, oh legend, the third wheel legend...always in the way.