..Besides, who's gonna point out all my incedious typos for me?

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Shame on Us for All We Have Done. May God Have Mercy on Our Dirty Little Hearts.

I just read all of your comics, believe it or not. If you distilled down the funny from all 37 of them into about four or five comics, they would be pretty funny comics. So, see if you can concentrate your funny into less comics instead of spreading it out so much.

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Legend, oh legend, the third wheel legend...always in the way.

Makes sense, to an extent. Maybe for now I shot stop the plotting for now...

Which ones we're funny?

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Shame on Us for All We Have Done. May God Have Mercy on Our Dirty Little Hearts.

I can't remember any specific funny. I just recall a general air of funny that seemed to waft through several of the panels here and there.

I would try not to narrate too much -- captions tend to screw up the flow of the comic -- and try to coalesce the air of funny into more concentrated clods of funny. That way you -- hey, wait a minute. To an "extent"? What the FUCK? To an EXTENT????

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Legend, oh legend, the third wheel legend...always in the way.

I only read the latest comic. DOn't try to tell a story, try to be funny. Try to make the reader laugh before the second or third frame.

Punchlines also work.

Maybe this is better, eh?

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Shame on Us for All We Have Done. May God Have Mercy on Our Dirty Little Hearts.

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Legend, oh legend, the third wheel legend...always in the way.

Looks sort of like my Aunt Elka and Rush Limbaugh in their younger years.

lol

Rush Limbaugh's your uncle?

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Legend, oh legend, the third wheel legend...always in the way.