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You're not as bas as I expected you to be after I saw your name. Try not to use so much narration, though.

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Batman created by Bob Kane

I agree with dcom, too much narration (frosting), not enough beef. Needs more beef.

Defenitely good on the seasoning, though. Do try not to heat it up too much by having too much text. The text (herinafter referred to as the spice)can wane readers' attention, since they don't really want to read entire paragraphs. Lazy bastards.

In total, not so much spice, not so much frosting, more beef, good seasoning, nice start.

Let me get this straight -- your name is Chris Check, and you want me to out your comix?

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Legend, oh legend, the third wheel legend...always in the way.

No, he's Chris, Czech, and he wants you to out his comics. Can't you tolerate a few typos?