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torrenter
Stripcreator Newbie

Here are my best 3 so far - what do you folks think?

Jo - the stand-up comedienne by torrenter
12-01-04
Jo is good at telling jokes ...
Anyway, this punch-line walked into a bar..
... and the barman said; "Hey what would you like?"
... but she can never remember the punch line
Is that it?

The perils of live TV by torrenter
12-01-04
The fourth series of 'Robots on the Toilet'
Artificial Intelligence? What the hell are they talking about?
Nothing artificial about us, sweetie.
This is the worst reality show I've ever been on
shhh! the adverts are about to finish

The modern church embraces the Internet by torrenter
12-03-04
It's been a long day
hi! my names mandy and im 13 years old
hi mandy!!! im 13 as well would you like to meet?
Interdenominational sex is such fun
You're younger than I thought

12-03-04 5:53am (new)
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boinky33
I'm with stupid ^

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BOO!

12-03-04 6:47am (new)
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biped
Mr. Wonderful

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I enjoyed these comics. They are a good start.

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12-03-04 9:42am (new)
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torrenter
Stripcreator Newbie

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Thanx @biped. I hope to get some better dialogue, having seen some of your stuff.

12-03-04 2:24pm (new)
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areallystupidguy
Poison Gas Pokemon

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That is fucking scary. Seriously, I nearly shit my pants when I saw that.

Also, your comics aren't half bad.

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12-03-04 4:51pm (new)
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BigFrank105
Obsessive Comic Disorder

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Hm, a good start. Not bad for a newbie. We're not all fond of our first 10 comics or so aren't we? Keep up the work Torrenter, just stay with it.

12-03-04 5:14pm (new)
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TheBigJE
I Slayed Ganon. Seriously. He's fucking dead.

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LOLOLOLL TERRIBLE LOLOLOLLOLOL

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12-03-04 7:45pm (new)
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Matchbook_Romance
Going. Coming.

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Stick to your day job, and stick to Stripcreator. =D

12-04-04 5:41pm (new)
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TheBigJE
I Slayed Ganon. Seriously. He's fucking dead.

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The modern church embraces the Internet by torrenter
12-03-04
It's been a long day
hi! my names mandy and im 13 years old
hi mandy!!! im 13 as well would you like to meet?
Interdenominational sex is such fun
You're younger than I thought


i don't get it.. so the amish guy has a computer??? LOLLOLOLLLOL

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12-05-04 9:32am (new)
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BigFrank105
Obsessive Comic Disorder

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Who ever said he was amish?

12-05-04 4:20pm (new)
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TheBigJE
I Slayed Ganon. Seriously. He's fucking dead.

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uhhh, TEH FAHSION POLICEE LOLLOLOLLAMO

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12-05-04 4:25pm (new)
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boinky33
I'm with stupid ^

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Kaddar.

12-06-04 7:43am (new)
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BigFrank105
Obsessive Comic Disorder

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Maybe he's just DRESSING like an Amish, like how I, uh, dress up like a McDonalds worker to may day job...

12-06-04 3:59pm (new)
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TheBigJE
I Slayed Ganon. Seriously. He's fucking dead.

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or like how i dress up like a n00b slayer to go to my day job LOLLOLOLLLOL

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12-06-04 4:54pm (new)
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torrenter
Stripcreator Newbie

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I guess if I have to explain it, it's a bad comic. The caption on frame 1 implies that they are both using learning to use computers 'in their spare time', but instead of bible research... oh, never mind.

This one's more straightforward:
Corny Joke by torrenter
12-03-04
I've got erectile dysfunction - can you help?
Sure that'll be $20
ooh ahh - yes! yes!
I can raise the dead, baby - now come over here
Here's your $20 - you're the best!
It's $40 - you forgot to allow for inflation

12-07-04 1:06am (new)
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torrenter
Stripcreator Newbie

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Or an easier religious theme:

Alien Art by torrenter
12-07-04
Hey mister! What are you doing?
I'm drawing God.
But no-one knows what God looks like
They will, soon.

12-07-04 2:44am (new)
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TheBigJE
I Slayed Ganon. Seriously. He's fucking dead.

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makes a brotha think too much LOLLOLOL

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12-07-04 3:26pm (new)
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MikeyG
Shoots the shit and often misses

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Getting better as you age, torrenter. Keep it up.

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12-08-04 8:46am (new)
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