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situationism
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Please check out my latest comic, as well as my others.
Your constructive criticism is appreciated.

268129[/comic]]

1-28-05 5:39pm (new)
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not_Scyess
not laughing with you

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Not bad, but try not to put in information that isn't necessary. (A good rule of thumb is that the narration box is almost never necessary.)

I'd suggest the following changes:

Better than Comic #268129 by not_Scyess
1-28-05
Oh great, here comes that self-rightious ass-bitch, Father O' Pedagain.
So Father, why isn't there any mention in your bible about us dinosaurs?
You DO realize that I'm taller than you, right?
What a dick.

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peddling the funny around since 09/24/2002

1-28-05 5:47pm (new)
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80_Million_Fleas
Make a New One!

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This is EVEN BETTER.

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Shame on Us for All We Have Done. May God Have Mercy on Our Dirty Little Hearts.

1-28-05 9:02pm (new)
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situationism
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Thanks not_scyess. I get it. Much better.

80_million_fleas - Not funny.

1-29-05 1:01am (new)
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