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EugeneBowlkie
Stripcreator Newbie

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Ok, so I'm new to this site. I just signed up about 15 minutes ago and I've made 3 comics. I just wanted to know what people thought of them. Here's one...

[Click to view comic: 'Rainbows The Clown 1']

Reading that one and my two others and telling me what you think would be greatly appeciated! Thanks!

2-06-05 12:30am (new)
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Nasher781
Stripcreator Newbie

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I loved it! Very funny! I like random stupiod shit like that. That's why my comics are also random and stupid. Keep up the good work!!

2-06-05 10:03am (new)
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ArtemisStrong
masturbating to Japanese shit porn

Member Rated:

"Worship Jesus" was really funny. After that it was kind of downhill. Keep with the absurdist stuff, cut down on the dialogue and narration and you'll be fine.

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Ham-fisted ham fisting.

2-06-05 12:19pm (new)
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theReverend
Sometimes back but not all the times.

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Agreed. The first one was really good, the second one was mostly good besides the confusing punctuation, and the last one was okay cept the last panel was a little weak. In my opinion.

But hey, nobody cares what I say, GOD DAMMIT.

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8===D

2-06-05 2:25pm (new)
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biped
Mr. Wonderful

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Look how funnier is punchline in clown comic if no narration get in way. Clown burn up little girl, suddenly think, "I am, eh, the fired." People read, laugh at funny antics of clown.

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Legend, oh legend, the third wheel legend...always in the way.

2-06-05 2:39pm (new)
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not_Scyess
not laughing with you

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I thought the comic was rough, but funny. I'd like it better if, as biped suggested, you kept the dialog to only what's necessary to make it funny.

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peddling the funny around since 09/24/2002

2-06-05 2:57pm (new)
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CHUBBY
Stripcreator Regular

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You're a non-donor and therefore cannot get your feeback.

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"We're fighting for this woman's honor, which is probably more than she ever did." Groucho Marx

2-08-05 11:45pm (new)
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andydougan
Film critic subordinaire

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I like them. Most folks' early comics are total shit, so these are promising.

2-09-05 1:08pm (new)
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