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hawaplop
February 7, 2005 3:34 AM

ever seen this happen to anyone?

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not_Scyess
February 7, 2005 8:47 AM

More of the same.

In the 2nd panel, do you really think we can't figure out that feelings are being revelaed without telling us? Just because the "narration" field is there, doesn't mean you have to fill it out. For example:

/comics/not_Scyess/95494/

Also, take the last line that Jen says. You could cut that down to 1/3 the length it is and it woudl be much better. If the audience has already gotten the joke before the joke's out, you lose.

And, finally, your teenage-angsty comics are hardly original. That's kind of a theme that's already been beaten to death. Try some different avenues.

Oh, and feel free to post all your comics in ONE THREAD.

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hawaplop
February 7, 2005 11:36 AM

the point of it is to show every cheesy emotion possible...i guess ur not too smart on humor

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Inflatable_Man
February 7, 2005 3:46 PM

quote:
i guess ur not too smart on humor"

i guess ur not too smart on grammar

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biped
February 7, 2005 6:50 PM

quote:
the point of it is to show every cheesy emotion possible...i guess ur not too smart on humor

There isn't any humor in your comic. That's the fucking problem, shit-for-brains.

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