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This comic is awful. The narration boxes aren't necessary, and making the reader read what isn't necessary kills the humor. Say it in the dialog.

Again, your lack of subtlety and your overuse of wording has killed the joke.

Oh, and feel free to post all your comics in ONE THREAD.

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peddling the funny around since 09/24/2002

yea ur comics are godawful...mine are atleast true and dontarent so farfetched to the point of beyond reality...cheap jokes arent good...neither r u

You make birds hurt in space.

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