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First Strip: Eheheh. Funny q.b. Decent use of narration.
Second Strip: hum...eh. A almost decent pun.

Keep it up.

try to cut down on the narration. You probably don't want to get not_Scyess in here to give you a long lesson in how excessive narration will give you AIDS