Ok, here is my comic.

Life in hell by dayne 3-26-05

Cadaver the host of the party is greeting his friends to his party Having fun at the partay. Yep this partay rocks. So, why you in hell. I am related to george W. Bush. Sorry, but we put you republicans in the basement. *gulp*

" />

Life in hell by dayne 3-26-05

Ummm... can I have a premotion, satan. Let me think... No! Gaurds!!! Kill!!! Ummm... I have a question.... Why do we have to act so primitive? Yea, my IQ is 120. Get satan!!

" />

Life in hell by dayne 3-26-05

The squirrels continuously beat up satan. No you dare kill your leader I don't give a shit. Yo, jesus the devil is dead now. Yea, but... Thus cadaver and jesus played pingpong every sunday. Who will I play ping pong with on sundays Hey, I am open on saturdays.

" />Tell me how you like my comic. Sorry i made a little typos in my comic.

The wording is kind of rough and hard to follow, but aside from the crudeness I'd say these are pretty funny comics at heart.

Do note that any of those comics would've been funnier without the narration boxes.

---
peddling the funny around since 09/24/2002

Ok, but I dont find it confusing.

Oh an here is my new comic

Life sucks by dayne 3-27-05

Hi, wanna buy candy shut up, kid. We will set a.. Curse on you. Doo Doo doo you will die. Lalala die die

" />

Life sucks by dayne 3-27-05

You got mail. Wow, I wonder what it is. Its from us to tell you.. prepare to die. My life sucks.

" />

Life sucks by dayne 3-27-05

So i got sick of those little girls and this is how it went. Love the X-ray vision. And the other girl... Help...

" />

Ok, here is the new life in hell comic.

Life in Hell by dayne 3-27-05

You have no mail. .... You have mail Yes! Hey its me Jason wanna go to the bar. Can't breath... Throat damaged *dies*

" />

You're rather going downhill, I think... unless there's something I'm just missing.

---
peddling the funny around since 09/24/2002

Different people have different tastes.

Here is a comic (i think) is funny soon if everyone likes the trailor i will make the actual comic.

Cerial killers by dayne 3-28-05

The following amy contain severe randomness. Veiwer's discretion advised. Ahh, where is me lucky charms? I seduced him and he gave me them. He was so drunk. Sill rabbit tricks are for kids. Your not a kid either, ass hole

" />

They pretty much sucked from the get-go. There's hardly any coherence to them, and the lack of coherence isn't even funny. The ones that are coherent are really so run-of-the-mill and patently unfunny.

---
The giant three-phallused phallus of Uzbekistan will one day squirt the cosmic jizz of revenge all over Canada.

Ya, but how does that help my comics. just saying my comics suck doesnt help me.

I know that, but you don't seem to take criticism well.

A real punchline once in a while would be good. Lose the unnecessary narration, of course, and add some coherence.

---
The giant three-phallused phallus of Uzbekistan will one day squirt the cosmic jizz of revenge all over Canada.

Yes, but in yer last post you were just saying I sucked. So, give me advise for now on. Anyway, I am not the best comic. Just started Oh and here are some new ones. DnD jokes.

Life Sucks by dayne 3-28-05

So, ummm I was thinking we have been friends for so long.. Yes? Well Do you want to go to the movies? Sure! So, friday at 8:00. Ok.

" />

Life Sucks by dayne 3-28-05

Ahhh, he is going to die. Stop ruining the movie. Yum Ow. Knew it. ...

" />

DnD geeks by dayne 3-28-05

Ok, lets do our spot check. Okay, roll! Ok, nothing there. Same. Ok, we got the guys with a bad spot check. Booo.

" />

The new me by dayne 3-28-05

So, I have been writing bad comics so what. Really bad. Shut up! Why? Because i have the power to delete. waha You bastard.

" />I hope this one is funnier.

I like dthe VERY first one about the Replublicans and the latest one. But the others...meh...they suck.

---
More lust than you can shake a stick at.

Most of your comics are funny, a few are confusing but otha then that I like them!

Thank you everyone now here are some new ones that may suck.

Little sisters. by dayne 3-28-05

Uhhh, what do you want, karen. Since I am your bwest lil swister. I want a barbie dream house. Uh, no. Why? cuz last time i gave you money you ate it. *burp*

" />

Mystery science fiction theatre 4000 by dayne 3-28-05

Now back to home improvement Damn it. Seems I am gonna die. Let 'em die and spare us. Wha the hell? That atta teach 'em Yay, bugs you saved us.

" />

Bullies... by dayne 3-29-05

Welcome to happy mcburger's burger. May I take your order? *sigh* Hahaha, ryan I thought you would become a bum. But, I have to say this is better. Haha you got to wear that idiotic hat. Ok, now why you here? Well, that kid. You know, pork chop? He wants you to fight 'em. Yo, moafa wanna fight? Ok, you fat tub of lard.

" />

I laughed at this one, but I laughed because I thought you were intentionally making this a bad comic.

---
The giant three-phallused phallus of Uzbekistan will one day squirt the cosmic jizz of revenge all over Canada.

Credit to you for keeping on coming back after everyone says your comics suck. Which they do.

No, actually, I did like the second one from the top, in a Beavis and Butthead kind of way.

Seriously though, spend a bit of time on punctuation and things will make much more sense. At least put in a comma where there would be a slight pause in the speech.

Tony

You DO have persistence, and I DID think that "little sisters" was funny, but before you post something, try getting a friend to read it and see what they think before making yourself look like an idiot. Just take the critisizm in stride and try a little harder.

---
I'm not out to make you laugh. I just want you to piss your pants

Ok, here is a don't smoke 1. If you smoke this may be offensive.

Don't smoke by dayne 3-30-05

So, kids don't smoke you could end up like this... Uhhh can't breath... Wrong movie idiot. Uhhhhh. So, don't smoke kids, and pay no attention to the second panel. Hehe

" />

Lil sisters by dayne 3-31-05

Ahhh, nice. Thats the stuff. Well, seeya tomarrow. Yep. Hehe. You saw everything, eh? Sorry. But, I will have to kill ya.

" />

Don't smoke you idiots by dayne 3-31-05

Appearently... My no smoking comic didn't work on ya smoking bastards. Yea, ya heard da boss. I am done with da tapes do dat ting again you end up like that guy Yo, get ova here, pimp. Wanna end up like dis bitch His time is running out 5 more minutes and I have to be payed again

" />

Ok, I think this one is pretty funny.

Hackers beware. by dayne 4-02-05

Ok, spyware check on. Hey, that guy I hacked into is tying to stop me!! Don't dare you ass hole. Sincerely, Ryan That ass. I hacked into put 500 hundred viruses in my PC and made millions of sucky comics in my name on Stripcreator.com Harsh....

" />

It's alright stuff, I hate crisitsm but it's better than saying you suck, so i'll just say think a bit before you make a comic....make sure it makes you laugh at least three tiems in a row when you read it....not that i do this

---
I dumb :D