THERE IS NO "I" IN TEAM, BUT THERE IS AN "I" IN DIE. by Darth_Freeman 4-05-05

Childhood. FREAK! you will pay slushie boy... 30 years of reading one book later. snow...man....heat...sun...hmmm I have an Idea, this will work out to satisfy my axe wielding needs, and destroy slush boy! End. IT BURNS! BURN YOU SLUSHIE BITCH!

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hmmm?

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.~:IF YOU CAN SEE THIS I DON'T HAVE A SIGGY:~.

It's kinda funny....go with a harder punchline

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I dumb :D

It's not funny. Lose the narration and totally redo the comic.

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peddling the funny around since 09/24/2002

Ack.

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dcomposed:11-06-05: If I was a viking invading your village, you'd be the first to get raped.
Crabby: 10/5/06: i would love to feed you fresh fruit while bathing you.

It was kinda bleh, but I did like the line "Burn you Slushie Bitch!"

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I will rate you hard, and unendingly.

Meh, not so funny. The title, however was funny.

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Thar's a snake in mah boot!

NIce critique, how about some real critique, you know like here is a suggestion...man you guys are cruel sometimes

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I dumb :D

That one isn't your best, but I gotta say I like some of the others...

This one had me cracking up for a while...

ADDITION IS GOOD! by Darth_Freeman 4-05-05

NAIL+HEAD=FUN! ... WEEEEEE!

I'm not entirely sure why, but it really hit me just right...

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[i]"For the love of beatings, I plunder until my loins find satisfaction!!" [/i]

These people are really cruel sometimes? I invite them to be, Cruelness is usually best, as the fear of complete forum humiliation seems to make you antsy to never make a bad comic. However... That doesn't work on me, cause I really don't tend to take criticism seriously either way, however my ears are always open for any sort of critique.

As for the comic, I agree. It could be much funnier, if it was simply redone. Add a harder punchline, and how about some sharpened dialogue, let the snowman say more to infuriate the Masked Guy (Who stangely looks like a Pewter Jason Statue). Just not too much, as too much dialouge causes most people to be bored to the point of not wanting to read the rest. Which is really a shame (Glares at a few select people). ;o

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"I don't believe the president of the US has a say in the war; I don't think the US Citizens do either, the soldiers get the word, they go through hell to write it.