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flipynif1
April 7, 2005 8:04 AM

This is the second take on this comic. It does have potential to be funny, but I think I am missing something.

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not_Scyess
April 8, 2005 7:30 AM

If Maura in the 3rd panel thought something like, "I think I just coated my underwear in liquid fart discharge for nothing," leaving the rest of the comic the same, you might be closer to what you're looking for.

Not a bad comic, though.

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PrimoOoze1138
April 8, 2005 8:33 AM

I keep seeing that *Braaap* and thinking he's belching. Usually in comics, burps will be expressed in a "BRAAP". Maybe you could switch it to a *Pffft*?

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Seph_Deathstorm
April 9, 2005 1:27 AM

quote:
If Maura in the 3rd panel thought something like, "I think I just coated my underwear in liquid fart discharge for nothing," leaving the rest of the comic the same, you might be closer to what you're looking for.

I must agree, something similar to that extent. Something clever, yet witty. Although Not_Scyess's version kind of made me throw up a little in my mouth. I appreciate that you rotten bastard.

Anyhoo, the comic was quite funny. I laughed, honestly. It's just missing something, like you said.

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