This is the second take on this comic. It does have potential to be funny, but I think I am missing something.

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I dumb :D

If Maura in the 3rd panel thought something like, "I think I just coated my underwear in liquid fart discharge for nothing," leaving the rest of the comic the same, you might be closer to what you're looking for.

Not a bad comic, though.

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peddling the funny around since 09/24/2002

I keep seeing that *Braaap* and thinking he's belching. Usually in comics, burps will be expressed in a "BRAAP". Maybe you could switch it to a *Pffft*?

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Thar's a snake in mah boot!

I must agree, something similar to that extent. Something clever, yet witty. Although Not_Scyess's version kind of made me throw up a little in my mouth. I appreciate that you rotten bastard.

Anyhoo, the comic was quite funny. I laughed, honestly. It's just missing something, like you said.

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"I don't believe the president of the US has a say in the war; I don't think the US Citizens do either, the soldiers get the word, they go through hell to write it.