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Chuckaduck
My tongue's your thong...

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4-15-05 12:26pm (new)
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flipynif1
Aparently a Creep

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Funny jokes for shizzle, lol You're a whore was great. I like the names as well. There are a lot of the inner struggle comics, but so far those are the best i've read

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4-15-05 1:12pm (new)
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not_Scyess
not laughing with you

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I hate the names of the speaker with a colon in the word balloons. The whole point of little arrow under the balloon is to point out who's talking. It's really distracting, redunant, and it makes all your dialog ballons huge. Lose those.

Otherwise I think your comics are... aw, who'm I trying to fool? I didn't read past the names with colons.

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4-15-05 2:50pm (new)
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Chuckaduck
My tongue's your thong...

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Fair enough. I'm keeping the names, but I understand where you're coming from.

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4-15-05 2:56pm (new)
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I_want_a_TB303
Junior Comic Technician

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Why do you want the names in the speech bubbles? You should take the previous advice and drop them. As the above poster, I didn't bother reading after the first one because of them.

Tony

4-18-05 4:58am (new)
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Chuckaduck
My tongue's your thong...

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"Why do you want the names in the speech bubbles?"

Namely, because I do. Sorry if a little extra reading due to my personal setup of toon was too much for you.

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4-18-05 8:33am (new)
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andydougan
Film critic subordinaire

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You can do what you like. They're your comics. It's just that putting the names in the speech bubbles completely ruins the timing. This isn't Final Fantasy, you know.

4-18-05 10:01am (new)
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fuzzyman
Alpha Geek

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Do you see them putting the names in the speech bubbbles when you read the comics in the papers?

Seriously, it truly impairs the readabilty of your comics. It realy screws up the timing of the jokes. They are fairly funny, otherwise.

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4-18-05 10:01am (new)
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Chuckaduck
My tongue's your thong...

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"This isn't Final Fantasy, you know."

Oh.

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4-18-05 10:24am (new)
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not_Scyess
not laughing with you

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"Oh."

And you can quote other users in a more standard (and therefore easy-to-read) way by putting it in quote tags, [quote]like this[/quote].

You can find more nifty stuff about how to post here.

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4-18-05 11:21am (new)
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Chuckaduck
My tongue's your thong...

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""Oh."

And you can quote other users in a more standard (and therefore easy-to-read) way by putting it in quote tags, .

quote:
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like this
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You can find more nifty stuff about how to post here."

But then..

..and it's not like a quick copy & paste into some quotation marks...

...makes the topic impossible for readers to comprehend, or am I mistaken?

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4-18-05 11:58am (new)
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attitudechicka
is never bored.

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..and it's not like a quick copy & paste into some quotation marks...

Well actually, there's an awesome link at the bottom of each person's post where it says "quote" which allows you to quote the entire message written in that box and automatically takes you onto a reply page to the same thread. I'd say that's pretty quick and easy if you're just going to copy and paste everything anyway.

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4-18-05 1:15pm (new)
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not_Scyess
not laughing with you

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So? We are utilizing forum board code. Who cares what would happen if we're not? Do you plan on reading the forums directly from brad's database?

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4-18-05 1:26pm (new)
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Chuckaduck
My tongue's your thong...

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quote:
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..and it's not like a quick copy & paste into some quotation marks...

Well actually, there's an awesome link at the bottom of each person's post where it says "quote" which allows you to quote the entire message written in that box and automatically takes you onto a reply page to the same thread. I'd say that's pretty quick and easy if you're just going to copy and paste everything anyway.


Awesome? Nah. Pancakes are awesome.

For example, were I wanting to just quote from your post..

"Well actually, there's an awesome link at the bottom of each person's post where it says "quote"..."

..and cared not for the remainder I'd have to let the post-clicking-quote link page load up, highlight and select what I didn't want then delete it. Yay. Given that everything here previews prior to posting I'll pass.

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4-18-05 1:27pm (new)
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Algirdas
Junior Comic Technician

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I'm giving you my $0.02, which, after taxes, means you'll owe me $53,290.54. That's not including inflation, by the way.

The content is good, so I'm not going to comment on that. Aside from what I just commented. I think I just hurt my brain. Again.

Anyway....

About the name-in-speech-ballon situation: In a way, they're not really necessary. Just give the characters a formal introduction, and we'll figure out the rest. If you wish to compromise, you could do something like this:

[Click to view comic: 'Inter Sturggle Flight 284: For Chuckaduck']

I think some think that having the reader constantly reminded of who each character is in each panel is considered insulting to their intelligences. (Not mine, though. I don't have any intelligence.) Others may simply get tired of seeing the same name over and over again. However, when all else fails, you could resort to something like this:

[Click to view comic: 'Innard Struggle, Take 284: For Chuckaduck']

After all...

**sings** "It's yo thang.... do whacha wanna do..."

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4-18-05 1:38pm (new)
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Chuckaduck
My tongue's your thong...

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Thank you. Excellent suggestion and I will absolutely consider. My thanks.

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4-18-05 1:59pm (new)
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not_Scyess
not laughing with you

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If you wish to compromise, you could do something like this:

[Click to view comic: 'Inter Sturggle Flight 284: For Chuckaduck']


Nah. And to illustrate my point, let me bring to you

[hr]

A Lesson in Stripping

There are only two states a comic reader can be in.

[list=1]
[*]the reader knows who the characters are
[*]the reader doesn't know who the characters are
[/list]

1) If the reader is in the first state, then obviously it is unnecessary to tell the reader who they are. This also applies to duck's strips, when even if the reader began in state 2, he is in state 1 after he starts reading the comic since the characters' names are forced down his throat from the get-go. But I digress.

2) The tricky part is if the reader is in the second state. The stripper must first decide what about the characters the reader needs to know.

2a) About 98.4 times out of 100, the characters' names are not on the need-to-know list, in which case you can simply write the comic with no introductions in the speech balloons or even narration boxes. I didn't read all of your strips, duck, but I suspect this is where your comics would fall.

2b) In the rare case that the reader does need to know the characters' names, then a skilled stripper will work that information into the flow of the conversation within the strip, rather than ham-handedly slamming it into some distracting place.

Examples

An example of how to work a name into a strip gracefully is

[Click to view comic: 'Stream of Comicness V|']

although it might not be the most appropriate example, since the name isn't really necessary for the strip. Another example of a strip where the characters' names aren't important is

[Click to view comic: 'Stream of Comicness |X']

Note how all information unrelated to the joke are totally left out: including the names of the characters.

This helpful tip has been brought to you by: not_Scyess and the letters F and U.

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4-18-05 2:56pm (new)
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andydougan
Film critic subordinaire

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Yeah! Don't sell out to the man! Express your individuality by using a non-standard quoting system!

4-19-05 6:39am (new)
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MikeyG
Shoots the shit and often misses

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Next you should try not breathing air like everybody else does, those conformist fucks.

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4-19-05 9:09am (new)
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