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Nevermore
April 21, 2005 3:22 PM

I'm new here, but I wanted to share some of my best comics. Here's a few in the series "Robot tells it all"

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and now here's a few others

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Nevermore
April 21, 2005 3:46 PM

A remake of the very first "The robot tells it all"

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andydougan
April 21, 2005 4:12 PM

They're not very good, are they?

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Inflatable_Man
April 21, 2005 4:33 PM

At least his handle suits him. Because "nevermore" is exactly what I was thinking while I was reading his strips.

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Nevermore
April 21, 2005 4:36 PM

Wow! Thanks for your opinions!

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Inflatable_Man
April 21, 2005 4:44 PM

No problem!

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Algirdas
April 21, 2005 10:31 PM

Let's see, where to begin.... Ah well, I guess at the beginning.

"The Robot Tells It All"
It was alright until the very last line. That just killed any potential humor the strip could have had. It left me thinking "so what?"

"The robot tells it all 3"
Again, the last line just doesn't really bring any humor to the strip; it instead kills it.

"The robot tells it all 2"
"So, you'll the kind for a long, long time." What did you actually want to write here?
Again, the last line doesn't bring out the humor. Maybe if the robot had instead creatively lied about how the dinosaurs'd be wiped out, it'd have been at least bit more humorous.

"Hector's adventures."
After I read this, I was left thinking "...and?" The child being "scared" isn't all that humorous. That strip definitely needed something more.

"The two gayest men on earth"
I was expecting something a lot more... extreme?... than what happened in that strip. As it is, I wouldn't attribute what those two are doing as what "the gayest men on earth" would do.

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not_Scyess
April 22, 2005 8:58 AM

I didn't think they were as bad as everyone else does, although the delivery of the punchlines (and some of the other dialog) seemed too forced to get a laugh. The premise is funny enough, if you can work it out.

I don't get, though, why the background changes in the last panel of all your robot strips. That's really annoying.

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