Let's see, where to begin.... Ah well, I guess at the beginning.
"The Robot Tells It All"
It was alright until the very last line. That just killed any potential humor the strip could have had. It left me thinking "so what?"
"The robot tells it all 3"
Again, the last line just doesn't really bring any humor to the strip; it instead kills it.
"The robot tells it all 2"
"So, you'll the kind for a long, long time." What did you actually want to write here?
Again, the last line doesn't bring out the humor. Maybe if the robot had instead creatively lied about how the dinosaurs'd be wiped out, it'd have been at least bit more humorous.
"Hector's adventures."
After I read this, I was left thinking "...and?" The child being "scared" isn't all that humorous. That strip definitely needed something more.
"The two gayest men on earth"
I was expecting something a lot more... extreme?... than what happened in that strip. As it is, I wouldn't attribute what those two are doing as what "the gayest men on earth" would do.
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