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Pink Donkey Wrangler

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4-24-05 5:51am (new)
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Inflatable_Man
Heart stopper. Hip hopper. Pill popper.

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Thanks to you I've been tearing apart my room searching for my Pixies CDs for the last half an hour...

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4-24-05 8:19am (new)
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Pink Donkey Wrangler

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How come the posts in my threads are rarely about my comics and often about my nick?

Ah, well. Maybe I should be thankful for the answers I get...

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All-ah ha-reh int-eh lika bra som duuuu!

4-25-05 5:45am (new)
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ChromeSteel
Stripcreator Newbie

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Ok here you go. I'll try to keep it constructive.

There were several I didn't get.

Reverend Hellraiser was a decent idea with sub-par execution. More of a punchline would have been appreciated.

Satan's new style was ruined by the narration. Remember, narration is a last resort, only to be used when you can't convey the information some other way. I still laughed at the dumb little "Bllzee-Bob" line though.

That's about it. Work on your punchlines and you'll be set.

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I used to be mikeweeney.

4-25-05 9:16am (new)
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Pink Donkey Wrangler

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It's so hard to make funny comics at stripcreator!
IRL are my punch-lines often based on expressions, reactions, actions etc. And the language's also a problem. I'm from Sweden, y'know...

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4-27-05 4:58am (new)
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PhreakyChinchilla
DANGER WILL ROBINSON!

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We don't care about your handicap here. Stop making excuses.

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dcomposed:11-06-05: If I was a viking invading your village, you'd be the first to get raped.
Crabby: 10/5/06: i would love to feed you fresh fruit while bathing you.

4-27-05 6:52am (new)
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andydougan
Film critic subordinaire

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Most of the people here are Americans and Scots. In my experience Swedes speak better English than them.

4-27-05 7:26am (new)
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not_Scyess
not laughing with you

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It's so hard to make funny comics at stripcreator!
IRL are my punch-lines often based on expressions, reactions, actions etc. And the language's also a problem. I'm from Sweden, y'know...
That's part of the challenge. Why did 15th centruy poets have to make poems in iambic pentameter and sonnet form instead of free verse spoken word like poets today? Well, for one so they wouldn't suck as much. But also because the rules make it more of a challenge to produce something good.

People often want to make comics here that require experessions or positions from characters that don't exist. Sometimes they make them anyway -- and the comics always suck. The sad fact is that if you want a range of positions, expressions, backgrounds, etc.... you just need to learn to draw.

That being said, I really loved your "Pana'Ma and sister Camden" comic. The ones before that were pretty lame, and the ones after that didn't really make any sense. But "Pana'Ma and sister Camden" was good enough that I'll let you continue to strip.

You're welcome.

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peddling the funny around since 09/24/2002

4-27-05 9:08am (new)
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Debaser
Pink Donkey Wrangler

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We don't care about your handicap here. Stop making excuses.


Ah, okay.

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4-28-05 5:46am (new)
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MikeyG
Shoots the shit and often misses

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"wanna give someone a fruit?" and "Pana'Ma etc." were pretty good. Especially the Pana'Ma one, but the rest were just all over the place and seemingly written by a 5 year old.

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The giant three-phallused phallus of Uzbekistan will one day squirt the cosmic jizz of revenge all over Canada.

4-28-05 8:45am (new)
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andydougan
Film critic subordinaire

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I'd like to see all you criticising cunts write a comic in Swedish. Or any other language, for that matter.

4-28-05 10:10am (new)
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squidrabies
I am a Care Bear.

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4-30-05 1:57am (new)
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andydougan
Film critic subordinaire

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Usted no es uno de los "criticising cunts".

4-30-05 6:09am (new)
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Inflatable_Man
Heart stopper. Hip hopper. Pill popper.

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Grainy footage of an obese black kid eating soup and smiling...

Sigs don't get any better than that, folks.

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4-30-05 7:19am (new)
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