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valvenis84
Stripcreator Newbie

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4-24-05 8:20pm (new)
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andydougan
Film critic subordinaire

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It's not very funny, but as first comics go it's practically a da Vinci. You might want to consider punctuation, though.

4-24-05 8:30pm (new)
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Inflatable_Man
Heart stopper. Hip hopper. Pill popper.

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Bullocks. My first comic was a lot better. Still... I've seen worse.

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Destroying my reputation one post at a time.

4-24-05 8:31pm (new)
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valvenis84
Stripcreator Newbie

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4-24-05 8:37pm (new)
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andydougan
Film critic subordinaire

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You've got worse with age.

4-24-05 8:48pm (new)
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valvenis84
Stripcreator Newbie

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4-24-05 8:49pm (new)
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Screendummie
Stripcreator Regular

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Helloooo ladies!

--S. Dummie

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Greatest Zombie Komic in the Universe

4-24-05 9:59pm (new)
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not_Scyess
not laughing with you

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The first one you posted might've had potential, but you blew the punchline. It was pretty obvious that the cop didn't understand he was talking to the killer in the 3rd panel, so there's no joke there if you just continue that status quo. Liven it up with some wit or a twist we don't.

The other two, unfortunately, were hopeless. But I don't think you're hopeless as a stripper.

Yet.

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peddling the funny around since 09/24/2002

4-24-05 10:27pm (new)
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ChromeSteel
Stripcreator Newbie

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Ditto what they said, but good job with the whole switching to proper punctuation thing.

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4-25-05 9:20am (new)
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crabby
I have an awesome avatar.

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Helloooo ladies!

--S. Dummie


You beat me to it.

4-25-05 11:02am (new)
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theReverend
Sometimes back but not all the times.

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Your mom's hopeless as a stripper.

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4-25-05 2:15pm (new)
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