my new comic check it out and tell me what ya think of them

death on the job 1 by guth 4-25-05

im here sorry i came early cause i was board arnt you feinds with my dad? yeah i work for him arnt i supposed to get speacil treatment? you asked for speacil treatment didnt you? oh well he gets testy alot dosnt he?

A spell-checker would be a good start.

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Destroying my reputation one post at a time.

Indeed. You made a mockery of the word "special."

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all the wrong things for all the right reasons

cut me some slack, now anyone here that dosnt point out spelling mistakes and say "indeed" have something to say

I assume that by "dosnt" you mean, "dost," as in "you do point out spelling mistakes." So let me say, the spelling in your comics and posts is very, very distracting. Aside from that, I think the premise was alright, but the punchline could use some work.

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I think, therefore I make comments on a forum.

thank you, finaly thats all i wanted some advice instead of people just saying your spelling is bad wich dosnt help abit

Here's a nice guide by umfumdisi:

GUIDE: How To Make A Comic At Stripcreator.com by umfumdisi 4-07-05

#1 Avoid using this space unless absolutely necessary. #2 Think about the witticism you are about to create. There's a lot of space between here and the last panel. #3 Pace and timing are crucial elements of humor, so figure out the best setup for your punchline or denouement. #4 Avoid using this space unless absolutely necessary. #5 Don't arbitrarily change characters. #6 Use backgrounds that help illustrate the "action," theme, and/or mood of your comic. #7 Do not use the above "random comic layout" button without adult supervision. #8 Using proper grammar, spelling, and punctuation makes the reader more comfortable and aids in comprehension. #9 Never pay anything more than five dollah for sucky sucky.

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all the wrong things for all the right reasons