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Man, I love the setup, but for the life of me I couldn't get the punchline right. It's supposed to be obvious that the horse wetting his pants has nothing to do with the crime scene behind them. Which is where funny lives. Where has my funny gone? Do me a favor... Even thought this isn't a "comic competition", would anyone like to remake this comic (with any characters of your choosing, of course) and show me the correct funny? I'd be eternally grateful. Of course, it's still my intellectual property, so I will retain any and all future publishing rights of any alteration of said comic, as well as all merchandising and product placement deals. I'll have my lawyer write something up and send it to your people.
