I also liked "if you were trapped on a desert island..." the best. Though I thought they were all pretty crappy. the shrooms one was the worst. I appriciate that the comics are legible, rather than full of unnecessary punctuation and spelling errors.
A few points others would probably say:
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* Use less narration
* Include punchlines
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All in all, I'd say you have potential. The first one was bad, but not compete garbage. Unfortunatly, it was your FIRST comic that was the best, which would lead one to believe you are progressively getting worse.
One more thing. not_scyess refuses to click links. We're not sure why, but a lot of others on the site have followed suit. So if you want people to read these, you might want to read this: http://www.stripcreator.com/forums/help/index.html learn how to post comics in the forums, and then you'll get more of a reaction.
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Mediocrity at its most average.