Here is my new series I haven't been known for being too funny so please give me tips on where I could improve.

The Virtual RPG Episode 1 by crazymalicous 6-07-05

That thing your wearing looks like the pee suit my Grandpa wears when he gets too excited. Uhm... it's not a pee suit. What is it then? A SuperNova Hyper Duality Reflux Testing Shooter Double X4 Powered Processer of Graphics Reality System RPG. It's a virtual reality videogame suit. It puts you in the middle of an RPG. Have fun with that now. OK. Here goes nothing....

" />

The first two panels were a great set-up, but you failed to put a joke in the 3rd.

Also, you don't need to add any HTML tags in your post. Just cut and paste the url (the one that for this comic would end in comics/crazymalicous/289988) and the forum will post it automatically.

---
peddling the funny around since 09/24/2002