[Click to view comic: 'another day at the office']

[Click to view comic: 'The bunny']

*cough*...

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DIE YOU HEATHENS!!!

You spelled "awkward" wrong. I DID appreciate the strip very much as a WHOLE, though.

The office strip was beyond terrible, into the realm of awfulness reserved for 3-year-old leftovers you forget about until the power to your refrigerator goes out while you're on vacation for two weeks.

The second had potential, but didn't quite make it. I also think you mixed up who should have a thought baloon and who should have a dialog baloon.

Keep trying, though.

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peddling the funny around since 09/24/2002

not_Scyess, I appreciate your critiquing of KingOfMusic89. However, you spelled "balloon" wrong
twice to let you know in advance of other posts that
you'd make with that word.

Let me try to fix that awkward sentence of mine.

However, you spelled "balloon" wrong twice. This is to let you know in advance of other posts that you'd make with that word.

[Correction made.]

"BLANCHE, BRING IN THE INVALIDS!"

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Legend, oh legend, the third wheel legend...always in the way.

quote:

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Let me try to fix that awkward sentence of mine.

However, you spelled "balloon" wrong twice. This is to let you know in advance of other posts that you'd make with that word.

[Correction made.]

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