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Butch #1 by drawinger 6-27-05

Look,you're wonderful, and we've been going out for a while, so,um, would you marry me? Gosh Butch,I'd love to,but what about my parents? Well,move in with me,anyway. .........

Butch #2 by drawinger 6-27-05

I'm collecting donations for my in-laws' funeral They died?How awful! They will be dead,anyway. Oh, God. Just walk away...

Butch #3:The Suprise. by drawinger 6-27-05

Hi,Dearie! Butch...I'm pregnent. TAKE THAT!!!

Deeper and Deeper:Butch #4 by drawinger 6-27-05

My WIFE!! Dead.... Yep. By the way, do you know____ Crap.

Butch #5:The Whistler by drawinger 6-27-05

You're feeling guilty, aren't you,Butch? No. Well,that screwed THAT up.

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Yes, I refuse to reply to these comics with words.

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More lust than you can shake a stick at.

Actually, not bad. Again, I think the jokes could've been more pronounced, or had more of a smooth flow to them. But the concept was pretty good, maybe.

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peddling the funny around since 09/24/2002

Not_Scyess is sorta my friend!

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But I will give Butch #2

Kinda.

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More lust than you can shake a stick at.

Okay,you two,howzabout this?

Butch #6 by drawinger 6-27-05

You killed her? Yea.I couldn't help it. Oh,Butch, people are so predictable and cruel.I fell like we're all black-and-white in a colorful world.

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1, 4, and 5 don't even have punchlines. funny ones, anyway.

6, however, is actually not bad at all if you ignore the spelling and punctuation.

I think you're getting somewhere!

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Legend, oh legend, the third wheel legend...always in the way.

*grumble grumble* stealing my idea *grumble*

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It was such a waste of everyone’s time and money that even the Tokyo stadium’s rape robots apologized– something they were programmed specifically never to do.

good choice of butch character in frame 3 of comic 4

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what if nigger meant kite

Really? Oh...Wow!

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From what I gather it's as if you're not too sure on where you want to take Butch as a plot. It has potential, but needs some polishing. Retool the earlier ones with a little more attention to detail so you can draw the audience in, do some pre-writing for the future installments, and you'll have a really good series on your hands.

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If you do just one thing in life, then you need to get out more and expand your horizons. Honestly, that one thing can't possibly take-up all your time.