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read one cmon...

Not bad, I feel very comfortable with this strip for some reason. Try that same strip with several diferent punchlines and see if you can make it better.

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-=- You eat one lousy foot and they call you a cannibal. What a world. -=-

Some of your comics sucks squirrel balls, but others rock. This one is your best here...

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More lust than you can shake a stick at.

hari some suck balls because im just fooling around with a friend, so im not really getting rid of lame ones like the ones at the start.

hmm i know it need a better punchline- i just cant think of a better one.

btw. i made couple more.

The comics are rough but there's genuine humor there. Keep trying.

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peddling the funny around since 09/24/2002

any tips m8? i never tried doing this before. but i have billion lil ideas in my head that are really funny. just dont know how get them down in some sort of media.

Try pre-writing. Getting something onto paper is a good start. Once you have something, tweak it a little so that it flows conversationally. It might sound insignificant at first, but my truly ingeneous comics that everyone agrees are funny were done in this manner(and after splitting the field as to whether I'm funny or not, getting a general consensus lets me know I'm onto something good).

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If you do just one thing in life, then you need to get out more and expand your horizons. Honestly, that one thing can't possibly take-up all your time.

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The comics are rough but there's genuine humor there. Keep trying.

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What he said. Keep it coming. Is good.

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Please replace the handset, and try again.

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[Click to view comic: 'bush is dumbass 4th']

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i like the punchline(though wouldn't fiber actually help?), but if you dont you can flip it making the last panel something like:

monkey on left(dialog): 'i suppose terorists are notorious for that sort of thing.'

monkey on right(thought bubble): 'so are wayward monkeys with a belly full of fiber and nothing but time. nothing. but. time.'

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what if nigger meant kite

[Click to view comic: 'RD#1: some people where mask...']

this morning i decided to start making lil strips on what happens on ratedesi forum that im on.

The concept behind the strips is good, but your spelling and grammar makes my eyes bleed, which detracts from the quality. It makes the strips look a lot better if you really make an effort to keep spelling ans grammar errors out; they can't all be perfect, mind you, but they look more professional.

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It was such a waste of everyone’s time and money that even the Tokyo stadium’s rape robots apologized– something they were programmed specifically never to do.

i know but honestly im just fooling around :P

Was that deliberate?

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I love Family Guy more than I love taffy, and I'm a man who enjoys his taffy.

Was that deliberate?

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i hope so otherwise the darkside has just added its first royal to the empire.

second if you count saberhagen

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what if nigger meant kite

Was that deliberate?

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No, that's a result of my horrible typing skills. The 'd' key is the bane of my existence and either shies away from me when I want to press it or jumps in the way when I'm reaching for a letter nearby.

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It was such a waste of everyone’s time and money that even the Tokyo stadium’s rape robots apologized– something they were programmed specifically never to do.