heres my first comic check it out. click on this link to see it.

http://www.stripcreator.com/comics/hairless_donkey

I'd have gone for...

hairless_donkey's 1st comic redone for ex. by Chuckaduck 7-29-05

I'm looking for a new suit ok what kinda style i'm looking for a "i'm a loner and a really bad leader kinda look" oh i got the perfect idea sir here try on this george bush suit to my left

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Don't like it? Eat me.

False advertisement! There was nothing about fisting in that comic.

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Mediocrity at its most average.

Hmm. Maybe this then...?

hairless_donkey's FIST comic redone for ex. by Chuckaduck 7-29-05

I'm looking for a new suit ok what kinda style i'm looking for a "i'm a loner and a really bad leader kinda look" oh i got the perfect idea sir let me fist you!

I'll stop.

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Don't like it? Eat me.

That last one was funnah, Chuck. hairless...keep your day job.

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More lust than you can shake a stick at.

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I'd have gone for...

hairless_donkey's 1st comic redone for ex. by Chuckaduck 7-29-05

I'm looking for a new suit ok what kinda style i'm looking for a "i'm a loner and a really bad leader kinda look" oh i got the perfect idea sir here try on this george bush suit to my left

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dead people

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Legend, oh legend, the third wheel legend...always in the way.

Dead people. Done.

hairless_donkey's FIST comic redone for dead people. by Chuckaduck 7-29-05

I seek flesh for wear. ok what kinda style i'm desire a "i'm a dead kinda guy and my be considering devouring your brain look" oh i got the perfect idea sir here try on this george bush's recently killed pawn suit to my RIGHT... ...and let me fist you.

Really though. I'll stop.

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Don't like it? Eat me.

that was funny!

so do u guys think my comic is good for a newbie?