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DonnGarydude Stripcreator Newbie
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0401040 Has serious reservations about reality
Well, I'm not into MMORPGs, so the subject matter doesn't appeal to me.
---The tongue licking the ars of pretension.
flipynif1 Aparently a Creep
They are ok. Perfect for those characters
---I dumb :D
attitudechicka is never bored.
1. Narration not necessary.
2. Making them humorous might help.
3. Proofread. Some of your typos are overlookable, however others make it difficult to understand the subject. Such as "rad" and "read" are two similar words that could easily be typoed as one another, but would make the sentence very different.
4. I liked #10.
5. Donate so you can delete one of the #14's.
---Mediocrity at its most average.
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