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slasher_thrasher21
Stripcreator Newbie

I'm new to this wonderful website and just wanted to say Hi all and check out my first comic. Let me know what you think! I like criticism, only helps me get better.

Look forward to talking to all of you!

-Justin

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"Hey its that dog!" ~Resident Evil 4

8-19-05 12:52pm (new)
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Chuckaduck
My tongue's your thong...

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Needs more ninjas.

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Don't like it? Eat me.

8-19-05 12:54pm (new)
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slasher_thrasher21
Stripcreator Newbie

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More Ninjas lol... Nice... I'll try and include one in my next Comic just for you :)

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"Hey its that dog!" ~Resident Evil 4

8-19-05 12:55pm (new)
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mandingo
weak stream

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for starters, you should probbly lose the narration boxes. they seem to be redundant in panels 1 and 3. then maybe stick to one background for a little while since switching 3 times is hard to pull off and make funny. then don't make the nail in head the punchline. you had no way of knowing, but it seems to have been done to death already

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what if nigger meant kite

8-19-05 2:08pm (new)
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arbi
Stripcreator Regular

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done to death already
.omg .lam .e

jejejeje, sed the pink donkey.

but yes, that was constructive criticism, and welcome, s_t. More ninjas.

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woof

8-19-05 9:24pm (new)
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Hari_Nezumi
Streeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeetch

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This comic si great!!! OMGLOL!!! Oh, and by "is great!!! OMGLOL!!!" I mean it sucks. I didn't laugh at all. But you're new. You could get better.

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More lust than you can shake a stick at.

8-22-05 11:57am (new)
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squidrabies
I am a Care Bear.

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Narration boxes 2 and 3 should have been omitted. As far as gamegeek comics go, it was okay. A decent start. I liked the punchline. Next time have more to it than, "Nintendo sucks, I'm driving a nail into my brain."
My biggest problem is your name. You're either a slasher or a thrasher. You can't be both. And you're probably not 21, so I'm guessing you're the 21st slasher/thrasher which (A) Is impossible and (B) Would be sadder than being the 1st slasher/thrasher.
Might I suggest "Slasher_mon-wed_Thrasher_thu-sat_I_take_sundays_off".

8-22-05 10:55pm (new)
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