I can't teach you HTML, but Please use punctuation to separate your sentences.
And the best way to get your comics rated is to post them in the forums. Copy/paste the urls for what you think are your best ones into a reply, and the forum code will automatically post the comics in your post. Don't bother with all that crap with the url tags; it doesn't work right.
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It was such a waste of everyone’s time and money that even the Tokyo stadium’s rape robots apologized– something they were programmed specifically never to do.