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Purno
Stripcreator Newbie

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Hey guys/girls, I made some comics, I hopy you found the amusing somehow.

My dad doesn't know I'm skipping classes by Purno
11-07-05
Yeah, my dad doesn't know I'm skipping classes.
Everyone does it. But hey, I got to go, see you at the bar tomorrow, Nancy.
See ya!
Nancy, could I have a little word with you?
Oh, hi dad...

Is Nancy at home? by Purno
11-08-05
Hey Mrs. Nanesbury. Is Nancy at home?
Hey Jennifer
Nancy said she went to your place to do homework with you.

The computer just broke by Purno
11-08-05
I got to call the computer store. The computer just broke.
I turned the thing on but the screen stayed black.
Did you also turn on the monitor?
What do you mean? Does the monitor has it's own power button?

Have you seen Nancy? by Purno
11-09-05
Dad, have you seen Nancy?
Yeah, she went to Jennifer to work on some school-assignment...
...something for physics class. She said she had to do some experiments with the reflection of sound.
So she's at the discoteque again?

There's more at my profile, but I think these were the 'best' ones.

Whatcha think?

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Purno has spoken

11-09-05 4:52am (new)
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JESUSSANDWICH
is a wonderful person

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These comics remind me of little old ladies.

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possible savior probable SEX MACHINE

11-09-05 12:36pm (new)
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flipynif1
Aparently a Creep

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Nancy is my type of girl

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I dumb :D

11-09-05 1:04pm (new)
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not_Scyess
not laughing with you

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That is a more elegant way of saying what I was about to.

The comics have no punch in them. I see the jokes there, but they feel like they've been sanitized -- probably they just aren't thought through well enough. Judging by the subject matter and the tameness, I'd say it's more likely that you're too young than too old.

But at least there are jokes; that's better than many people do.

That having been said, I thought the last one was pretty good. Keep trying, and reading other comics (webcomics and even certain syndicated comics as well as comics on this site) and I think you'll be a good stripper someday.

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peddling the funny around since 09/24/2002

11-09-05 8:44pm (new)
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JESUSSANDWICH
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"Oh Mabel! that was so funny you should cut that out and put it on your refridgerator."

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11-09-05 9:17pm (new)
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Purno
Stripcreator Newbie

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Thanks for your comments, guys/girls :)

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Purno has spoken

11-10-05 12:25am (new)
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JESUSSANDWICH
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Am I really adopted? by Purno
11-08-05
Hey Dad, am I really adopted?
Ehm... Tom, listen, ehm... You better ask your mom.
Hey Mom, am I really adopted?
Of course not, my dear!

Making Purno's comics better. by JESUSSANDWICH
11-10-05
Hey Dad, am I really adopted?
Ehm... Tom, listen, ehm... You better ask your mom.
Hey Mom, am I really adopted?
Of course not, my dear!
I just got raped in Harlem.

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11-10-05 12:38am (new)
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Smarmulus
THE ARISTOCRAT

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Jesus, adding a joke to that comic really made it better. Maybe it's just me, but I prefer comics with jokes in them. Good job.

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"Eat a fucking cock." - attitudechicka

11-10-05 7:07am (new)
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Smarmulus
THE ARISTOCRAT

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Purno, you might consider this an suggestion for an improvement.

Have you seen the sandwhich? by Purno
11-09-05
Matt, have you seen the sandwich I just made for Nancy?
You know, the one with her favourite jam. I took the last bit of jam out of the pot. You know, the jam which can't be bought in the supermarkets anymore.
Ehm... yes I've seen it. It's delicious jam indeed...

Admittedly not a great improvement, but an improvement to some small degree.

Jesus told me to improve this comic by user Purno by Smarmulus
11-10-05
see www.stripcreator.com/comics/Purno/321623
Matt, have you seen the sandwich I just made for Nancy?
Why yes. It's quite delicious.
Asshole, I made that especially for Nancy, not for you.
Ehm, you might want to call the poison hotline. RIGHT NOW!

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"Eat a fucking cock." - attitudechicka

11-10-05 7:24am (new)
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Hell_Bent_Cheez
Member - Tobor Fan Club

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You have to not be afraid ton make fun of people, or their race, kind of like this....

Ahh... Arabians by Hell_Bent_Cheez
11-10-05
Hey babeh, What do you say we go worship Ala?
I could take you to the mosque in my Cadillac.
One moment, just let me get my worship mat.

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Making cheesy jokes in 5..4..3..2..poop.

11-10-05 5:07pm (new)
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GreatestComics
Stripcreator Newbie

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Recycled characters being used in daily newspaper peanuts situations. That equals yummy. But not funny. Still nice attempt. Like everyone has already said, just try to stop being so tame. We were not put on this world to be amish... ERR... Strict... Sorry.

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Welcome. You've got mail. Oh... Just kidding it's spam. ...And porn.

11-12-05 8:28am (new)
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