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raeyo
November 26, 2005 7:24 PM

Plese give me tips not jsut flames. -_-

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Hari_Nezumi
November 27, 2005 8:57 AM

OK...here's a tip...make them funny. And making sense would be a good idea.

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Hari_Nezumi
November 27, 2005 8:57 AM

OK...here's a tip...make them funny. And making sense would be a good idea.

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raeyo
November 27, 2005 12:32 PM

heres a tip the second one is and inside joke and why dont you actually help. dip shit.

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raeyo
November 27, 2005 12:35 PM

Please help ful critisism

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raeyo
November 28, 2005 6:46 PM

Eh... I want a helpful responce.

There not as good as the others

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squidrabies
November 28, 2005 8:14 PM

That last one would be great without the first and third panels. I actually giggled. The others ones... umm... You don't really have any jokes in there, do you?
First a guy killed a snail. Then a kid won't give ice cream to a plant. Then... well, there was nothing in the next one. Then a wizard said mmf and a guy got an axe. It seems like you come close to having a joke, then you give up and end the comic without a joke having happened. And the children cry.
And that is my helpful response.

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HCRoyall
November 28, 2005 9:05 PM

If you eliminated the first and third panels of the first comic you posted, it would be non-sequitor enough to be gigle-worthy.

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squidrabies
November 28, 2005 10:19 PM

Hahah, yeah, it works when you only read that middle one.

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