Birdflu - the shakedown. by Hatrix 1-12-06

January 2006 Ahem. Testing 1..2..3.. The birds send a representative to discuss their part in preventing a possible bird-flu pandemic... It appears they have realized their advantage. $50 million and the release all of the KFC hostages or I cough on my eggs.

and another one

PC Politics by Hatrix 1-12-06

Who can take tomorrow, dip it in a dream? Separate the sorrow and collect up all the cream? The Candyman can! This has been a paid political announcement from the PC party.

be gentle, I haven't refilled my perscription this week.

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“Life is intrinsically... boring and dangerous at the same time. At any given moment the floor may open up. Of course it almost never does; that's what makes it so boring.”--Ogdred Weary

Gentle? Crap, I'm outta lube. Wouldn't y'know it.

Anyways, I rather enjoyed the first one.

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Don't like it? Eat me.

#1 - The first and third panels of narration aren't necessary. And the narration in the middle panel could be in the form of an introduction by a representative in the first panel. That yellow box is just so annoying and rarely useful in a comic, avoid it at all costs. I liked the comic otherwise, though.

#2 - I'm not really political and therefore have no idea what you're talking about here. Ask your target audience.

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Mediocrity at its most average.

Gentle? Crap, I'm outta lube. Wouldn't y'know it.

Anyways, I rather enjoyed the first one.

Thanks!

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“Life is intrinsically... boring and dangerous at the same time. At any given moment the floor may open up. Of course it almost never does; that's what makes it so boring.”--Ogdred Weary

I like the first and get the second, bicariously liking the second.

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the kid's getting old, the kid's getting old

I love them...the first one is really funny