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HisJesterness Stripcreator Newbie
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My first comic! Funny if I do say so myself.
[Click to view comic: 'The Main Course']
---"Humor is like a rubber sword - it lets you make a point without drawing blood." ~Mary Hirsch
Inflatable_Man Heart stopper. Hip hopper. Pill popper.
Wha--?
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I-... I-....
---Destroying my reputation one post at a time.
AudaciousMoose Junior Comic Technician
Your dialogue is patronizing to the reader. For instance "look, it's a pig!" Yes...we know it's a pig...
Try something a little more subtle.
ElTigreMask2K Pink Donkey Wrangler
[Click to view comic: 'Subtle']
---Menthol?
CheerUpEmoKid Member - Tobor Fan Club
Well, I thought it was good anyways ^_^
---"Cerebral ... does that mean your heart?"
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