My first comic series, an Amish man who spends his spare time solving high profile crimes in the city, read on and see if he has what it takes, I personally think it gets good/shows potential at the fourth comic onwards:

Amish P.I. 1 by mcallister 6-04-06

We find our hero deep in conversation with an eye witness... And then the doctor said "Thats not a tumour, thats my foot" HAHAHAHAHAHAHA HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA HAHAHAHAHAHAHA Whats a Doctor?

Amish P.I. 2 by mcallister 6-04-06

Once again we find our hero interviewing eye witnesses... Yeah I saw the whole thing Go on Well they were both arguing for about 15 minutes about money and then one of the guys pulled out a knife and stabbed the other ... Do you want to know what the man looked like Not right at this moment, i'm still trying to figure out what you are meant to be

Amish P.I. 3 by mcallister 6-04-06

So did you get as much information as possible I got by I guess Good, just go into the other room and input all the details into the computer Okay What are you made of? Jesus christ, not him again

Amish P.I. 4-1 by mcallister 6-04-06

Alright we've had a tip-off, that this is where the fugitive is hiding, we want you to go in undercover and find out What should I say, should I put on a different hat? these questions are driving me batty To be continued... Hello, what can I help you with Have you stabbed anybody to death lately

Amish P.I. 4-2 by mcallister 6-04-06

No  Alright, thank you for your time He said no he hasn't killed anybody You don't ask that, you probe, you ask other people in the house where that man was at about 2 pm yesterday To be continued... Ok, i'll ask somebody else some questions Good, and put on a disguise

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Ha, I loved it, good job.

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"Cerebral ... does that mean your heart?"

Didn't have much of an ending but otherwise enjoyable. I like your non-series comics better, though. In fact, I like them enough to kill whoever tries to stop me from reading them if I feel like it.

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Legend, oh legend, the third wheel legend...always in the way.

Yer I agree with Biped. Not much of an Ending. But enjoyable. Wouldnt mind seein the next Series....
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Eating Uncooked meat is Like Fucking a Undressed Women...Read Ma Comics!!!

Yeah the ending was a cliffhanger, will Amish P.I. survive???

Alright Season 2 begins right now:

Amish P.I. season 2 - episode 1 by mcallister 6-20-06

Previously on Amish P.I. Whats a Doctor? Ok, i'll ask somebody else some questions Good, and put on a disguise And now Season 2 of Amish P.I. begins...next week TAKE THAT**ROAR** AARRRGGGHHHH

Yeah it was a recap episode but who cares???

I love me a good series. Kudos.

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the kid's getting old, the kid's getting old